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FANFIC POST: "The Dying of the Light" Part 2/3 (Twilight)

Oct 20, 2007 14:52

Title: The Dying of the Light
[ Part I]
Author: Sara C. (paintedponyxox@flowrs4ophelia)
Characters & Pairings: Edward/Bella, Jacob/Bella
Summary: She knows they are not flying off to Neverland. They are not flying anywhere. They are falling, down, down, into a dark and freezing cold place there is no returning from.

( you're the queen of the underground / and you can send me dead flowers every morning / send me dead flowers to my wedding / and I won't forget to put roses on your grave )

twilight fic & meta, twilight: the dying of the light, twilight fic & meta: mine, twilight, my fic

Comments 20

crimsonrose54 October 20 2007, 20:57:13 UTC

awwww, so cute! keep going!!

halls October 20 2007, 21:07:09 UTC

This has to be the most perfect twilight fic I've read lately. I can almost feel Bella's pain as my own. Looking forward to the last part of it :D

utfan23456 October 20 2007, 21:49:36 UTC

awww sooooo cute! i love your writing! its very intresting!

holbytla October 20 2007, 22:00:24 UTC

She suddenly remembers the name of a boy called Jacob Black, and all of these other fragile, small things. The recipe for Charlie's favorite dinner. The words of a Dylan Thomas poem she studied as a high school freshman. The colors in the dress that her mother is wearing in the picture of her she used to keep in her locker. Her stuffed elephant she got for Christmas when she was seven and named Peanut.

Love that, even though it is heart-wrentching. Oh, Bella! You crazy girl.

heartvscliche October 20 2007, 22:07:39 UTC

oh I do hope you continue this soon! so well written.<3