FIC POST: A Good Man Is Hard To Find, Chapter 1/15: "Barred Windows" (Tiger & Bunny)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: A Good Man Is Hard To Find
Author: Sara (flowrs4ophelia)
Characters & Pairings: Kotetsu/Barnaby, some Kotetsu/Tomoe, + ensemble (notably featuring Kaede, Nathan, Karina, Antonio)
Rating: hard R
Summary: The city was complicated and dangerous, everything shrouded in facades, and maybe it was no wonder someone like Barnaby who'd never known anywhere else

Comments

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thanks! :) It always feels weird getting the hang of writing characters in a new fandom, so I'm glad to hear the characterizations are working for you. (I'm definitely finding Nathan especially fun to write. XD)

[ninety6tears]

What I love about this so far:

EVERYTHING.

Kotetsu's obliviousness is perfect, awkward dinners are perfect, Bunny being weirdly jealous about Karina is perfect, Nathan is perfect, the dialogue is just SWELL.

MOAR.

[flowrs4ophelia]

Hehe, what's so funny is Barnaby's POV would be just as oblivious if not more so.

COMING AS QUICK AS I CAN WRITE IT. Keep bothering me out of taking any breaks, lol.

[xenafox]

This is a damn good fic! I am excited to read more! :D

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thank you! :)

[thandie]

This is really great characterization all around! Just lovely, I can't wait to read more!

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thanks so much! :D

[love_michiyuki]

Love this so far!
Especially how Bunny seems jealous of Karina messaging with Tiger >:D

[flowrs4ophelia]

Glad you're enjoying it, thanks for the comment! :D