FANFIC POST: "The Persistence of Gravity" part 1/4 (Twilight)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: The Persistence of Gravity
Author: Sara (flowrs4ophelia)
Characters & Pairings: Sam/Leah, some Sam/Emily
Rating: R
Summary: His father was a complete screw-up who hurt and abandoned everyone who needed him, but he tries very hard to be a good kid, a good student, a good friend and son. And he swears to himself as he watches Leah sleeping now that he'll

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[flowrs4ophelia]

:)))

[nade2008]

this is ridiculously amazing. Sam and Leah fics break my heart and you have such a great writing style. I cant wait to read the next pieces!

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thank you muchly. :D

[kissinthesand]

This is really good! Alot of Sam/Leah fics paint Sam as a douche bag; I don't think he is. Their story makes me sad :(

[flowrs4ophelia]

Thank you! :)

Yeah, as freely as I hate imprinting, I don't get the hate for Sam for something he had no control over. In the next part I'm actually going to make a point of showing him as flawed in a way that has nothing to do with him imprinting or anything, because it would be kind of uninteresting to write him as just this perfectly and consistently responsible and good guy that bad things happen to. But his experiences had to be a lot harder than some give him credit for and I'm hoping to be pretty effective in showing his perspective through all that.

[mhgood]

Wow, your characterizations are lovely! Very nicely written.

[kirstenxashley]

This is amazing. I love that you made everybody in the pack real people. Your characterizations are great.

I'm pretty much in love with your Leah!