Constructive Criticism (she's starting to bloom)

[flowingsong]

RUKA MINAZUKI | FATAL FRAME
(Post-Game)

LUNARE | THE MUNDANE CHRONICLES
(
saturate | AIM: lunareism | PLURK: lunareism)

ANON ENABLED (but you don't have to hide behind a sock or anon, I don't mind hearing from people I play with, or even those I don't) | COMMENTS UNSCREENED (unless you request otherwise) | IP LOGGING OFF

I want to grow as a player, and a writer, so if you think something's off, but aren't quite sure, just comment; I could be feeling the same way, but as the player I might need someone to give me a push because of my own uncertainties.