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Broken [3/6]

Nov 23, 2011 21:24

Title: Broken [3/6]
Author: FloweryMisha
Pairing(s): JongKey, 2Min
Warning: BoyxBoy love. Enough said.
Summary: Jonghyun and Key are married, but after several years of marriage, Key asked for a divorce. Desperate, Jonghyun comes to a famous lawyer to ask him to change Key's mind.

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rating: pg-13, yaoi, pairing: jongkey, !fanfiction, pairing: 2min

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hitoshisakurai November 23 2011, 14:48:50 UTC

OMG

Now that I know what happened...

( ... )

hitoshisakurai November 23 2011, 14:50:10 UTC

/you made me so incoherent I can't even, it was supposed to be:
This kiss was all sorts of adorable and sweet, really <333
/too lazy to edit the comment

flowerymisha November 24 2011, 13:30:48 UTC

Y-your gif was scary and hilarious at the same time, babe XD

OMG!! I feel really bad making Key like that... But I hope it wasn't so bad...hopefully you'd still like the next chapter D:

JongKey could never be apart. Well, Jjong left him for SeKyung and now they broke up and Jjong got together back with Key asdhkfaksad what am I saying? OTL. And 2Min. Omfg. No words needed X3

Thank you <3

hitoshisakurai November 24 2011, 19:16:50 UTC

I know, right? XDD Furious Tamaki is the scariest/cutest thing ever, lol.

Judging by those 3 chapters I can tell you I feel that I won't be disappointed with the next one :D And by the way, about you feeling bad about making Key like that... I just remembered my chaptered fic ('Each Beat Reminds Me Of You') where I abused Key even more... like, a lot. A lot a lot a lot. Like, now, when I look back at it I can't help but shiver a little O_O so you haven't hurt him that badly *thanks God* ^ ^

Hahahahaha, I know what you're saying xDDD
Yeah, 2Min... though, ngl, I really like OnTae^ ^'' and I sometimes read OnHo too ;O

You're welcome bb <3

kii_chu November 23 2011, 16:33:28 UTC

Oh my Kibummie..... T______T

Who's that bastard who dare to do that to him, huh?!!! X((
Gosh, those people... they need to be punished for what have they done DX
but I'm glad that Jonghyun still love Kibum no matter what happened with him ;__;

adfsafhdsgfj I'm squealing when Minho kissed Taemin, it was so sweet <33

flowerymisha November 24 2011, 13:33:05 UTC

Yes, they need to be punished!

... /but I have no idea what to do with them in the next chapter.

Ofc Jonghyun still loves Key even after knowing it T_T I guess I just want to make a story where marriage can still survive after knowing the painful truth. Lalala I'm so lame OTL.

Thank you babe T___T

itsjustjodie November 23 2011, 19:42:08 UTC

Omg please put me in the story. I wanna kill everyone that messes with my Key
Jonghyun better be doing something about it because trust me I will!
Minho and Taamin; there soo cute. I'm super jealous. I hope they last.
Thanks so much for the update :D

flowerymisha November 24 2011, 13:34:50 UTC

I'll try to insert you as an assassin who cleans up everyone who gets in JongKey's way? XD sigh I hope the story wasn't so bad. I still want to headbang everytime I reread it.

But thank you so much babe <3 I'm so happy reading your comment!

queenofshy November 23 2011, 21:30:04 UTC

I WANT TO KILL THOSE BASTARDS!!! *looking for her knife* Jjong, you must do something with this! Good for you, you still love Key because... I'd treat you even worse than people who did that bad thing to Key... But still... don't yell so much. You know, Key is an angel. You can't raise your voice to an angel... (Lol, why I'm talking to fanfic's character? I'm stupid. XD)
And I feel so sorry for Key... I understand he didn't know what should do in that kind of situation. But I hope he'll be okay now. With Jonghyun. He must be. Right? <3
And 2min is so sweet. Again. Even if I don't like Minho I found him... nice... XD
Of course, I can't wait for the next chapter! <333~

flowerymisha November 24 2011, 13:37:16 UTC

OMG YOU'RE SO DAMN RIGHT BABE!

"You know, Key is an angel. You can't raise your voice to an angel... " --> she's so damn right, Kim Jonghyun. Now you better treat Key nicer now or she's gonna stab you with her knife!

XD waaeee you don't like Minho? T_T I hope you're gonna like the next chapter babe. Thank you <3

queenofshy November 25 2011, 17:34:39 UTC

Well, I used to like Minho. But then I've watched "Hello Baby" with my friend and we found him as a... creepy man. However, it's not a bad thing because he and his big eyes, strange faces and manners give us a lot of laugh. And it's good. Sometimes we even pretend that she (or me XD) are Choi and we talked like he's trying to pick girl up or he's a perverted doctor and I'm his patient... (Poor me, but it's really funny. For us. XD) Lol, I'm sure you don't get what I mean but don't worry, I understand. XD My English is... hm, I will be nice for myself and I say "not so good". And I just came back from school and my brain is full of Japanese words and sentences which I learned for today's test and I'm tired, lazy and stupid person so I'm not using a translator or dictionary, so sorry for all mistakes~ XD ( ... )

flowerymisha November 27 2011, 02:17:48 UTC

WHOAAA IT WAS SUCH A LONG COMMENT BUT I'M HAPPY TO READ IT BABY!! XD

And what the hell was that nonsense that you said your English's not good? Mine's not good either ._.

I'll post the next chapter today babe <3 I hope you'd still like it. I really do hope.

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nana_jjong November 24 2011, 14:49:25 UTC

OMAGAH!!!
I finally found it in AFF!!!!! (if you got 1 subbie with the same username. that's me. HAY GURL HAAAYYY!!)

ok, I'll brb reread this piece of awesomeness of yours

flowerymisha November 25 2011, 14:59:33 UTC

OMG!! Don't read iiiiiitttt! It's...bad...
You were a subscriber in AFF? Oh my God, you're too awesome T_T It's been a long time since I actually wrote JongKey but I just feel like reposting it on LJ...
I hope you're not bored. thank you sweetie <3

nana_jjong November 26 2011, 12:36:59 UTC

HOW COULD YOU SAY IT'S BAAADDDD?!?!?! o.O
IT'S TOTALLY AWESOME I'VE READ IT LIKE 5 TIMES ALREADY AND I DEF GOING TO REREAD IT AGAIN AND AGAIN AND AGAIN CZ IT'S THAT'S OSUM OMG YDEK!!!

and hey, i read your other Jongkey fic and it's my new addiction I swear you have to post it here cz it's just too good to just waste out there and I BEG YOU TO UPDATE IT LIKE NAO!!!
(omg, I should've commented there, but yeah I love this comm like my own baby and I repeat you must post your Jongkey fic here baby ^^)
/clings to you

flowerymisha November 27 2011, 02:15:29 UTC

F-for real? Okay... I'll try to be more confident baby OTL

I will post it later! Did you mean "Untouched?" So I was like reposting this JongKey ficcies in hope to find another inspiration to continue the story...I feel like I have the plot already, but it's still stuck, not forgetting to mention that it's actually only a chapter left...sighs. You don't have to comment of AFF baby, knowing you read it I'm so happy.

/piggyback you XD

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