Broken [6/6]

Dec 05, 2011 20:14

Title: Broken [6/6]
Author: FloweryMisha
Pairing(s): JongKey, 2Min
Warning: BoyxBoy love. Enough said.
Summary: Jonghyun and Key are married, but after several years of marriage, Key asked for a divorce. Desperate, Jonghyun comes to a famous lawyer to ask him to change Key's mind.
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rating: pg-13, yaoi, pairing: jongkey, !fanfiction

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Re: NINJA SPOT hitoshisakurai December 5 2011, 14:00:37 UTC
OH MAN.
THAT KILLED ALL OF THE LEFT TRACES OF ANGST THAT LINGERED THERE INSIDE OF ME TODAY.

IT ENDED TOO SOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!! DDDDD:



I mean... not in the sense of plot. Because the lenght of it is really perfect.
But just, oh gosh, I didn't want it to end >///////////<

Okay, so, where to start...
Oh.
Maybe with THISIMMENSELOVEANDAMMOUNTOFFLUFFANDHOLYSHITI'MONCLOUD11.
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Meeaaaaaaans:
Look, adopting children by homosexual marriages will always be a 'no' for me though it has absolutely nothing to do with bashing them *that'd be ridiculous from my side, literally*, I just... I don't like this idea. And I have many arguments for that. Anyways, I'm against that.
But this is fan fiction, soooooo~~~~~~ almost everything is allowed here >DDD Therefore...
GOSH LET ME JUST SPAZZ OVER HOW EFFIN CUTE MASON IS FALLING ON HIS BUTT DEMANDING HUGS FROM HIS UMMA AND BARELY EVEN STARTING GOING TO SCHOOL BUT ATTEMPTING TO SUCCESSFULLY COCKBLOCK HIS PARENTS ANYWAYS, MASON, YOUR UNCLE *Minho* IS PROUD OF YOU.



Now Mason has to take his job since his fellow uncle-cockblocker is too occupied with his own son

REALLY. It didn't feel awkward or anything though as I mentioned I'm against the idea, but you wrote it in such natural way that I just melted T_T

Dae Jung- I was freaking scared about this part. I thought something bad would have happened T________T
Buuuuuuuuut NO! The only thing that happened was the increase of Jjong's determination and passion and possesiveness *this good one* which leads us to another aspect of this chapter and story which is/are...
LOVE SCENES.
HOLY FREAKING DAMN CHICKEN YOUR LOVE SCENES.

"He couldn’t help but think, they’ve been married for almost seven years but everytime they make love, it always feel like his first. "
THIS!!!! THIS!!!! THIS!!!! SFM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THEY'RE SO FULL OF LOVE. AND PASSION. AND LOVE. AND PASSION. AND LOVE. AND LOVE. AND GOSH LET ME JUST HUG YOU, OKAY?!!!!

This is me after reading it:


Means: feels as if I got a baloon from Yesung. Or from DBSK Junsu 'cause he's like my #1 bias forever and the most adorable person in universe. Or from JongKey. Or, no no no wait, FROM MASON.
AMEN TO THAT.

Write more JongKey??? Pretty please???


*feline eyes you cannot resist*

Gosh I loved this story T_________________________________________T

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Re: NINJA SPOT flowerymisha December 6 2011, 02:38:54 UTC
OH MY GOD THAT WAS A LONG COMMENT FOR A NINJA SPOT!!! AND BABY YOU DON'T HAVE TO COMMENT ON THE FIFTH PART, IT'S ENOUGH ALREADY! T__T

I'm confused to replying this. XD I'm not good with gifs...so...errr, words are enough, no? /sighs. Waeee you don't agree to gay couple adopting kid? T___T I don't know too, I've never against this idea but I guess they do deserve a chance...or they could have a surrogate mother like in Queer As Folk...but I'm sure you have your argument and I'm not gonna win from that...but IKR MASON IS SO EFFIN CUTE XDD hahaha!

My FAILED love scenes? I always skipped the hot part, not that talented about smut, kekeke. And I'm happy to know you felt like you've just handed balloons with a ring on it--congratulations, you've just been proposed by Yesung! (And Wookie's gonna hunt you later? XDD)

I still have an unfinished story of JongKey though...I might, might, might post it later...but it's really unfinished, and I still got no idea for the ending...and it's even longer than Broken... /sighs... I'll think about it later, okay? But your comments were adorable and they made my day!

I love you T_T thank you baby <333

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