(FIC) Regress

[flowerofsin]

Title: Regress
Author: Eumenides (flowerofsin)
Fandom: Bleach
Characters: Nnoitra & Neliel
Prompt: 011 (change)
Word Count: 752
Rating: PG
Summary: AU. Memory lost amidst the rolling dunes.
Warnings: none
Disclaimer: I own nothing from Bleach. Kubo Tite rules all.

Comments

[hope_assassin]

May I say first that I love the design of your journal? I just joined nnoinel and this fic of yours is the first thing I saw, so I can't help but compliment you on the lovely layout. It really makes me happy to look at it. ^_^

As to the story, I find your writing style truly breathtaking. I adore this little ficlet of yours. It makes me want to read more stories by you. You've kept both Nnoitra and Nel in character, and the interaction between them and the role reversal thing were absolutely made of win. I am so happy with this story. I'm definitely adding it to my memories. xD

[flowerofsin]

Thank you! I made the header, but the template for the layout is from gossymer. Nnoitra was snuffed out a bit too soon in my opinion, so I like looking at his evil little grin.

I'm glad you enjoy my writing. Nnoitra/Neliel is a pairing that I keep coming back to. There was so much potential for it that just wasn't dealt with in canon so it inspires me to write off and on.

[hope_assassin]

I absolutely love the template and the header as well--you and gossymer definitely made a very good team for this layout. :D And, yes, Nnoitra should've definitely lived a bit longer because he absolutely ruled in so many more ways than one, but what can we really do... D:

Yup, there's definitely so much potential in this pairing and I'll definitely be on the lookout for more NnoiNel from you in the community then because you're certainly one of the authors whose writing I've enjoyed most lately. People nowadays have little time to spare for literacy and making sure they didn't make any typing mistakes somewhere along the way in their fanfics that your work, perfection embodied, seems like a large gulp of fresh air in that aspect. And to make it even better, it's such a great topic it's about and so well-rounded too... ♥ Simply made of win.

[frostedbasilisk]

I joined the nnoinel comm a few days ago and went back through the pages to check out all the stuff posted beforehand. And ... I absolutely ADORE your pieces for these two! They're very realistic and fun to read, and you keep everybody IC in a way that just tickles me. I'm glad you posted another one!

This little story was so adorable, but simultaneously managed to be a bit sad, too ... Nnoitra and Nel come off as a bit of a tragic pair to me, so that's just groovy if I do say so myself. Keep it up!

[flowerofsin]

Thank you so much! I think the reason I like Nnoitra/Neliel so much as a pairing is because of the tragic nature of it. There are so many ways it could have gone differently, but I like the more angsty possibilites.

[p_sky]

0.0

I am in awe. I will try my best to write something intelligent.
First of all, the idea of Nnoitra's and Neliel's situations being switched around was brilliant and pulled off so well. Their interaction here was endearing yet heartwrenching (especially the last sentence).

Besides, chibi-Nnoi is awesome XD

[flowerofsin]

I'm glad you enjoyed reading this one. I've become enamored of the role reversal between the two, so I might do another ficlet or expand this one. Heh, I like chibi-Nnoi, too. There's something so wrong about Nnoitra being cute that it seems almost right.