Fic: Après la Pluie (White Collar, G, 2100 words)

May 06, 2012 02:03

Title: Après la Pluie
Author: Flora
Rating: G
Genre and/or Pairing: Gen
Characters: Neal, Mozzie, Alex, June
Spoilers: Through 3.16
Warnings: None
Word Count: 2100
Summary: M. Moreau is a riddle, wrapped in a mystery inside a silk suit and a smile that will melt all your doubts.
A/N: Set post-S3. Written for sholio for this prompt at collarcorner. Huge thanks to my ( Read more... )

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silver_falcon24 May 6 2012, 06:55:21 UTC
Guh, I want to hug this fic until it yelps. Neal and Alex and Mozzie and JUNE and Paris. Paris. Oh Paris.
This is bitter and sweet and heartachey in a good way.

I love it <33333

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florastuart May 7 2012, 16:24:39 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I feel like Neal would want to be in a city, somewhere, and Paris felt right. Thank you so much!

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sholio May 6 2012, 07:48:00 UTC
Oh, this is exactly what I was hoping for and more! This is so lyrical and lovely and full of subtle, telling, carefully drawn details. It evokes a gorgeous mood that is both peaceful and melancholy. Thank you so much for filling my prompt! ♥

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florastuart May 7 2012, 16:27:36 UTC
I'm so glad you like it! Thanks for prompting - I'd had a vague idea of a situation like this in my mind ever since watching the finale, but your prompt gave me the inspiration to actually sit down and write it. *g*

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nieseryjna May 6 2012, 09:13:41 UTC
great story, with a touch of melancholy that's hurts a little, but I'm happy for Neal and Mozz at the same time, and their New York family is still there, ahhh

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florastuart May 7 2012, 16:32:02 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! I had a feeling they'd find a way to keep in touch somehow ...

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calis_1st May 6 2012, 11:45:09 UTC
This is - wow! Of course they would live in an apartment with a balcony over a bakery, and serve fabulous espresso. Your choice of movie posters is perfect. And I loved seeing Alex and June, too, and June being a mail drop. Can you tell I really enjoyed this story? Thanks for posting!

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florastuart May 7 2012, 16:55:04 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting! The movie posters were carefully chosen - I'm glad you liked them. And I wanted him to have a bakery. Just because. *g*

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frith_in_thorns May 6 2012, 12:47:24 UTC
Oh wow, this is completely wonderful! I love all the beautiful descriptions of Paris, and the serene sort of air that's all through this fic. And Neal settling into his life, but with June as a link back. This is adorable and perfect!

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florastuart May 7 2012, 16:56:46 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! I'm glad the descriptions of Paris work - I've never actually been there, so a lot of it's guessing. But it seems like a place Neal would fit in - for all Mozzie talks about retiring to a private island or something, I really think Neal belongs in a city.

And of course June is going to stay in touch, and make sure he is okay. *g*

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