Story: "The fire's mark" - Chapter One

[florachan]

Even if it can be considered as a part of a greater whole, this tale was however
meant to be a one-shot story perfectly capable to stand up by its own (or so I hope); my thanks go to
baranduin and above all to *wonderful* lorie945 who helped me to turn my hideous translation from Italian into something you could recognize as english, and who gave me amazing

Comments

[florachan]

Really?

I always imagined him like that too..^^
I think it would have been impossible for another hot-tempered lad to stay beside Alexander like Hephaistion did...
So I imagined Hephaistion had to be the real safe harbour in their relationship...^^

I hope you'll like the rest of the story too..^^

[carolina30363]

Le tue descrizioni, come, sempre, sono spettacolari!
Bravissima!
And I also agree with the previous comment!

[florachan]

Grazie Carolina!!^^
Tu la storia l'avevi letta in Italiano, che ne dici della traduzione?
Miiiiii, é stato un parto lungo e doloroso...^^

Thanks so much, darling!

[carolina30363]

Trovo che sia una traduzione fantastica, cioe' mi sembra scritta da una madrelingua non ho notato ne' forzature, ne' modi di dire italiani tradotti.
Complimenti :)

[florachan]

Beh, il merito é anche della ragazza madrelingua che mi ha aiutata a ripulirla...^^

Cmq é stata una faticaccia...da non ripetere!!!O_o

Re: Loved chapter one...

[florachan]

Thank you---^^