° One More Medicated Peaceful Moment, JunSeung

Apr 05, 2011 07:03

One More Medicated Peaceful Moment (7/?)
BEAST ° JunSeung, one-sided DooSeung
pg13 ° au ° 1929words, 14204total ° not mine, not even a little bit
if you spend your days longing for things you can never have, you'll miss the ones you can

an: lj's crapfest delayed this. apologies. :)
previous chapters: 01 02 03 04 05 06

I could make you fall for me. )

pairing: dooseung, . one more medicated peaceful moment, pairing: junseung, # fandom: beast

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lunaticbelle June 5 2011, 21:49:22 UTC
Oookay, finally commenting! This comment is representative for my opinion on all parts, and I'm commenting here, because this is my favourite part. I adore the sleepy and banana parts. <3 And the sweet kisses, d'aww. This is love <3

I'm not sure if I should write this here right now, but if anyone besides the author reads the comments, MAJOR SPOILER AHEAD! Do not read any further.

I loved this fanfic. And I'm sad it's over. :( <3 I enjoyed how Junni makes Hyunni fall for him. I also love how bold Junhyung is:) And baad, baaad Doojoon!! But I have to say, I don't really get why he couldn't be with Hyunseung (since he loved him too?? Did he think he wasn't good enough for him? Afraid he might lose his best friend?), not that I'm complaining. :D I love JunSeung. I was kinda surprised though, that you left the Doojoon-Hyunseung-Junhyung drama out. I expected some drama, like Doojoon wants to have Hyunseung for himself and uses dirty tricks or whatever, or at least some drama because of "the plan". Usually I'm a fan of light-hearted material without the whole drama going on, but this took me by surprise. I prepared myself for some drama and then there is none. :D
Even though I hoped for more chapters, I really, really enjoyed reading this and still love it. And it's really cool you wrote Doojoons perspective.

Hopefully I'll get to read and comment on more of your stuff, now that I got LJ. :) Thank you for sharing this.

Belle. <3

PS: Sorry for failEnglish.

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