Wowzers. Hell of a story you've got going here. I've just caught up on chapters 4, 5 and 6 in one mammoth read. I've gotta say I've been feeling such dread waiting for them to start college together. I'm not sure why... probably 'cos I reread the prologue every time I finish a chapter to try and glean some new information from it. It makes me sad that all three of them are inevitably going to get hurt in this fic. But sad in a good way!! Reading fic that inspires such emotion is definitely the sign of an awesome fic, so yay you!
Again, I love the way you've rewritten canon to make it fit to your story. And Naomi's utter hatred of JJ is pretty rad. I like how she can't even justify it to herself.
I must admit I'm perplexed as to the meaning of the birth control pills and the way Katie is showing Naomi off at school. In one way I read her behaviour as her taking control of the situation. Like, she *knows* she and Naomi are fit as hell together and therefore they automatically should be popular because of that. Just because they're girls shouldn't make a damn bit of difference to her popularity rating. In fact, Katie's probably worked out that if she plays it right, she could be HBIC with no worries whatsoever. Except for Effy. Which is why I'm assuming she's sucking up to her so strongly.
But then she's so lovely when they're alone and together... like, I really do believe that she's in love with Naomi and not just using her. Hence me being confused a bit. Mystery is good though. Very fucking good.
And Ems!! Oh Ems!! Good on you for taking control. Why torture yourself with constantly being around the twosome. Her being so strong makes the stolen kisses even more bittersweet. I hope her and Effy become better friends. Although your Effy is properly freaking me out at times.
Oh, and the reason I asked about whether you post as your write or have it all pre-written is because you post with such regularity and the quality of the writing is so high I couldn't comprehend you writing so quickly all the time. Guess you've just got mad skillz.
Again, I love the way you've rewritten canon to make it fit to your story. And Naomi's utter hatred of JJ is pretty rad. I like how she can't even justify it to herself.
I must admit I'm perplexed as to the meaning of the birth control pills and the way Katie is showing Naomi off at school. In one way I read her behaviour as her taking control of the situation. Like, she *knows* she and Naomi are fit as hell together and therefore they automatically should be popular because of that. Just because they're girls shouldn't make a damn bit of difference to her popularity rating. In fact, Katie's probably worked out that if she plays it right, she could be HBIC with no worries whatsoever. Except for Effy. Which is why I'm assuming she's sucking up to her so strongly.
But then she's so lovely when they're alone and together... like, I really do believe that she's in love with Naomi and not just using her. Hence me being confused a bit. Mystery is good though. Very fucking good.
And Ems!! Oh Ems!! Good on you for taking control. Why torture yourself with constantly being around the twosome. Her being so strong makes the stolen kisses even more bittersweet. I hope her and Effy become better friends. Although your Effy is properly freaking me out at times.
Oh, and the reason I asked about whether you post as your write or have it all pre-written is because you post with such regularity and the quality of the writing is so high I couldn't comprehend you writing so quickly all the time. Guess you've just got mad skillz.
Love this.
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LOL, poor JJ. He's not getting a break. And I liked him in S3 so I'm not projecting too much ;)
Obviously, I can say nothing about the contraceptive pills! But Naomi will find out at some point.
Yeah, brave move from Ems. Sadly she can't stay away from Naomi for too long it seems...
Ah I see! Well thanks for your compliment :) I just have no money and am forced to stay home a lot ;)
Cheers dude! ♥
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