Fic: I Never Said I'd Take This Lying Down - Emily/Naomi (mentions of Naomi/Sophia)

[flister]

Title I Never Said I'd Take This Lying Down
Pairing Naomi/Emily, mentions of Naomi/Sophia
Rating NC-17
Words 8600
Summary Naomi doesn't want to show her, really, but she can't not do what Emily asks of her.
A/N For immortality  as one of your birthday fics, which are now horribly late. Title from a song by Taking Back Sunday. This actually turned out a lot darker

Comments

[immortality]

Even though this ended up in a completely different place than where I expected it to end up, I still loved it and it still made me inappropriately sad in some parts.

♥

[flister]

Where did you expect it to end up, babes?

(I didn't know where it was going to end up, tbh - it just happened!)

And inappropriately sad? I think it's okay to be sad throughout ALL of this.

<3

[immortality]

I'm not sure, it just feels different than expected. Not in a bad way.

Of course being sad is lovely and fun, but sometimes I just want smut and then you go ahead with your clever ways of making me think and feel

[flister]

Yeah, I sort of know what you mean. It was really hard to write, actually. But it's further from what we originally talked about than intended, I think.

Yes yes - there'll be a nice dose of actual smut next. I just don't think I could have written this without it being really heavy.

I know what's next though :) And I'm looking forward to just getting them fucking. Hurray!!

[flister]

Oh thank you mate <3

This really ended up in a different place than it started - it was really just supposed to be porn but there was too much going on for me to leave it at that. So, yeah, I think all the frustration and confusion came out in this.

Glad you liked it :)

[flister]

Oh! *clings*

Thank you sweetheart - I sort of felt like I needed a lie down after this too (but it was about 3am so that sort of makes sense).

Yeah, fluffy porn next - might not break me so much!

Thanks my love <3

[00emsy00]

Just heart breaking and sad, but still beautiful and just lovely because it's them.
Loved it.
(I do think you should write happy times soon though because while this gives hope it still makes me cry :D)

[flister]

Cheers mate.

(And you always want something! Sheesh! But yes something happier might be coming.)

<3

[00emsy00]

lol, but as I moved into your journal not to miss your fics I think it is only fair you stop making me cry.
I pay you in tea ffs :)

[queenbellevue]

Man...gee...intense, angsty and rather hot at the same time...to me this is 100% canon :)

[flister]

Well they must have done it at some point, right?!

But yes, this is horribly angsty but I'm glad some of the hot came through too.

Thanks man <3