Keychain

[flipx]

So this is how it feels
To be in possession
Of a lighter keychain

Peeling them off
One by one
Into the evening breeze

Unburdened
From all the things
I didn't say

Comments

[sych]

that's really nice

[flipx]

Thesaurus.com recommends "bittersweet"; but thank you. :o)

[sych]

evidently i missed some of the meaning. i did like the poem though. hope you're all ok... it does sound like u've been unburdened, and that's kinda nice.

[sych]

in fact you used that exact word. i should have thought of a metaphor, but i didn't - i hope you'll overlook it :)

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[flipx]

Vacated and stripped, huh? lol

[sych]

oh there's some better ones in there. just let me know when you want to start the game :)