LJ Idol: Week 4: “Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent”

[flipflop_diva]

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Comments

[mistearyusdiva2]

Loved this ... Highly emotional and totally relatable. Well Done :)

[kickthehobbit]

I loved the progression of this-learning to bend then learning to stand up for yourself again. Nicely done. :)

[smiittenz]

It's achingly well written.
The language you use to portray the snatches of their lives is just enough to create a vivid picture of what happened.
It's very well done.
Also, I absolutely loved the ending. Just, LOVED IT.

[muchtooarrogant]

I like where you took the prompt, a steady progression of a mother's advice through your character's life. Nicely portrayed.

Dan

[sarcasmoqueen]

Loved this.