Comments | flimsy: fic: the morning breaks us up inside (Brendon/Ryan, Spence POV)

flimsy

fic: the morning breaks us up inside (Brendon/Ryan, Spence POV)

Apr 16, 2007 00:58

the morning breaks us up inside
1 523, PG
Spencer, Brendon/Ryan

beta'd by violentfires, thank you ♥

( It’s not the guitar, but Spence keeps his mouth shut. There is something wrong, and he heard it in those sloppy notes, and sees it in the way Ryan bites his lip, still screwing around with the settings. )

panic! fic, fic, brendon/ryan, spencer

Comments 40

klawick003 April 16 2007, 00:30:14 UTC

I really like the way you conveyed Brendon and Ryan's relationship through the eyes of Spencer.

Favorite part:

“It’s cold.” Ryan shakes his head again, and Spence sighs and pushes his blanket back, makes space for Ryan when he crawls into his bed, toes eternally cold against Spence’s own feet.

I feel like Spencer's always has Ryan's back and you showed it here, with the simplest thing.

“We’ll be okay,” Ryan says gently, singing it. “I really think we will be.”

Something about that stands out to me and makes me VERY happy.

Thanks for this. Wonderful.

flimsy April 17 2007, 21:17:05 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

simpleconstruct April 16 2007, 00:42:53 UTC

Yay, I kept wondering how this would all come together, and I really like the feel. And Brendon, I like this Brendon, I understand him.

LA;jfouaopf, I'm not making sense, what the heck.

He’s drawing intricate lines on paper he wanted to use for something more productive, and he doesn’t know why. Line after line, from one margin to the other, swirling.

That stood out to me because, I don't know, I do that a lot, and it just made me all warm. =)

<3

flimsy April 17 2007, 21:17:48 UTC

eeh ♥
thank you for listening to me rambling and asking for words!!

♥

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flimsy April 17 2007, 21:18:05 UTC

thank you! :)

cantspell April 16 2007, 00:51:15 UTC

I love these little peeks (that feels like it shouldn't be a word) into their life in the cabin and the way ryan turns to spencer for comfort. They are such beffies, and stuff like that just warms my cold little heart <3

flimsy April 17 2007, 21:18:47 UTC

Heh, yes, Spence & Ryan = BFF love.

Thank you!

jae_w April 16 2007, 01:05:44 UTC

I really liked this! Each of the segments were so precise and well-observed. I especially liked this: "I feel locked-up," Ryan says and it sounds as though he's reading a lyric. Thanks for the story!

flimsy April 17 2007, 21:19:23 UTC

Glad you liked it! :)