Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 4

Mar 20, 2011 19:20

TITLE: Spliced 5-4
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: NC-17. slavefic. scifi setting. M/m. some graphic violence.
WORD COUNT:  6,295 (this chapter), over 200k so far
SUMMARY:  In a world where clones are made and sold as commodities, Matt Muldane can't resist purchasing an intriguing slave.
NOTES:  The index to this story available here. Special thanks to aurila and to tuawahineRead more... )

slavefic, spliced, original fic, scifi

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triptyx June 29 2011, 15:19:33 UTC
I truly wanted to start the comment with something else than saying that I totally concur with You spoil him statement! >:D I am sure that was your intention when writing it! >;) You wanted us all to see how spoiled Min is! >:D So I needed to start this comment by saying that rest assured that your goal is accomplished! ;)

But even you have to confess how nice he looks when he kneels beside Matt and bows his head as a proper slave should! >:D

I am intrigued what is it about Garthen besides wanting to pit slaves against each other for the fun of it that makes Matt uneasy? Look forward to know if there isnt a whole hidden agenda behind that 'deal' he is making with Matt!

Nuit + puppies still incredibly sweet and I think its first and only time I will be cheering that a slave of yours dont run into trouble! :S This conscience thing = terrible!!! ;)

Another first and I dont know if it comes from me being partial to alcohol as much as to my kinks: The alcohol ban? First time ever I think Matt is being irrational! O__o What are you doing to me? ;) When he thinks that Min should bend over his desk at his office I am 100% approving, but not allowing him a drink???? Isnt he aware that lowers inhibitions??? O_O That would lead us maybe faster to the answer of this utmost important question: WHY IS MIN HIDING HIS ~TRUE NATURE~ = HIS KINKS?!!! >:D >:D He has to accept it, he likes to be whipped and chained!! Why does he deny his true andorian nature!!! >:D Repression of ~feelings~ is not good!!! >;) That I would get some enjoyment of a shameless PWP scene like that is just a pleasant side effect to the ~healing~ effects such a scene would have on Min's psyche!!! >:D ;)

Thanks I enjoyed getting on your nerves again commenting again on your stories! :)

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