Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 4

Mar 20, 2011 19:20

TITLE: Spliced 5-4
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: NC-17. slavefic. scifi setting. M/m. some graphic violence.
WORD COUNT:  6,295 (this chapter), over 200k so far
SUMMARY:  In a world where clones are made and sold as commodities, Matt Muldane can't resist purchasing an intriguing slave.
NOTES:  The index to this story available here. Special thanks to aurila and to tuawahineRead more... )

slavefic, spliced, original fic, scifi

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ilovetobefree March 21 2011, 22:13:41 UTC
Part II:

Nuit didn't seem adversely affected however. He might embrace the privileges Hollis had granted him, but he still behaved respectfully. Unlike Min, who took pride in being offensive whenever he could get away with it.
True, there is a big difference between Nuit and Min (and I think there always will be a difference.) Still, I love the way, Hollis sees Min and Nuit and how different they are. And all the work he did with Nuit so far.

“If I did something that cruel and unfair, yes! I want him to see it's unfair, and be offended. He adores those puppies, and he'd be heartbroken if I took them away. If I did that, he should be pissed at me for being a bastard, not resigned.”
Hollis is such an amazing person.

It would be payback for Min drinking his wine earlier.
O-ow.

Min turned away. From his hunched shoulders, Matt guessed he was wishing himself somewhere far, far away.
Poor Min.

He knew better than to leave it in Min's 'accidentally' careless hands.
The “'accidentally' careless hands” made me smile. (And AWWWW for the shirt accentuating Min's muscles - I loved to imagine it.)

“You can use that excuse if you like,” Matt said, stepping back. “For now.”
Irritation flickered across Min's features, but not bewilderment.
I would really like to know Alex’s thoughts about it.

YAY, I was so happy when I found this wonderful update today. :) You did an excellent job capturing Matt’s thoughts and feelings. And I absolutely loved Hollis in this. Great job! Thank you very much for sharing this. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

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flighty_dreams April 27 2011, 03:35:34 UTC
Whoops, catching up on comments finally.

Yeah, Hollis definitely has a different pov than Matt regarding those two. It's fun to play with.

What can I say, the boys enjoy teasing each other!

Yes, accidentally somehow lost it. :)

Alex will get his turn to 'speak' of course. :-)

Thanks very much for commenting. Sorry I was slow getting back to you. Hope you're doing well.

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