Spliced: Part 5 - Chapter 3

[flighty_dreams]

TITLE: Spliced 5-3
AUTHOR: flighty_dreams
WARNINGS: NC-17. slavefic. scifi setting. M/m. some graphic violence.
WORD COUNT:  4,835 (this chapter), over 200k so far
SUMMARY:  In a world where clones are made and sold as commodities, Matt Muldane can't resist purchasing an intriguing slave.
NOTES:  The index to this story available here. Special thanks to aurila and to tuawahine

Comments

[triptyx]

Well at least Matt had sex with Min after that party! Its one of the things I wrote you I was hoping for this chapter! ;) >:D >:D The rest of the list I dont know why didnt make an appearance!! ;)

I just LOL at this part “Then the deal would’ve fallen through the moment he asked to borrow you.” Can I say it is os much fun to imagine Matt if someone asks to fuck Min! >:D >:D None of the owners of your boys are the sharing kinds are they? >:D >:D Its just a degree of danger that accompanies that question, getting you executed with the Queen and well I dont know how much maiming Matt and Jenna are capable off, Jenna maybe just ruins their life economically! >;)

“I love that growl,” Will there be conditioning for getting the puppy to growl more? >;) But this was really a hot scene, I liked it a lot even if the fucking didnt come after a whipping!!! :D :D

You know that unlike for you and Min I find Matt's inability to apologize ... only done after mind-blowing sex, when you're relaxed and more agreeable, and said in the dark. That's how you usually do it.” not exasperating, but nice, probably because it drive Min mad! >;) :)

I never had a partner before LOL Matt your subconscious! :D And of course even this is not enough for Min!!! ;) >:D Come on as if you would think that even if Matt is subconsciously thinking of Min more as a partner than a slave, that I would forget that MIN IS A SLAVE!!! >;) :D

Aww the ending...and what is wrong with me and saying 'aww' to something that didnt involve Min getting punished for making a scene at a party? O_O ;) Hee this chapter was very good, thank you! :)

[flighty_dreams]

Lol, yes you got at least one of your wishes. :P See? I'm good to you!

Yeah I picture much snarling on Matt's part at the very idea, and perhaps even a punch to the face or a kick in the balls hehe. But yes, I do seem to have that protective/possessiveness as a recurring theme, don't I... nah, totally not a kink!

Lol. Is that your way of saying you like the growl, to condition the 'puppy' to do it more? :P And I will remember this part: "But this was really a hot scene, I liked it a lot even if the fucking didnt come after a whipping!!! :D :D" You said it! Whipping not required for hotness! :D

Mhmm, of course you would enjoy Matt's quirks. :P It's okay, Min is amused as well as exasperated!

Sigh! We (and Min) will all be 90 years old and you still won't have forgotten. But yes *cackle* at Matt's subconscious! >:D

Aww @ your awww. They really do deserve each other, in good ways as well as bad. XD

Thanks very much, I'm happy you enjoyed the update.