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flighty_dreams

Echoes - Chapter One

Mar 27, 2009 19:36

Note: Reorganizing this post to label this part of the story correctly.

TITLE: Echoes
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alina_kotik March 28 2009, 01:11:04 UTC

Very interesting. Boredom, the routine of slavery is worse than death to inquisitive minds, you have captured this well. The beginning is intriguing, I would like to learn more about this world and the characters.

flighty_dreams March 28 2009, 20:47:53 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you found that carried through well. It really is a terrible situation. And good, I hoped it would at least be intriguing, since he really doesn't know any more than the reader does. Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

twicet March 28 2009, 02:22:44 UTC

This is interesting, I would like to read some more.

flighty_dreams March 28 2009, 20:50:06 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it. :D We'll see, I've got some more scenes of this planned out already...

lab_jazz March 28 2009, 02:43:11 UTC

This is a very intriguing start...looking forward to reading more, but not at the expense of 'Spliced'

flighty_dreams March 28 2009, 20:52:08 UTC

Lol, that's how I feel too. The boys are still my first love of course, even though this has intrigued me. I made myself go back and work on Spliced after posting this. The next Spliced update is now in the beta-ing stage. ;)

ocotillo_dawn March 28 2009, 03:24:23 UTC

What lab jazz said. ^^

To the letter.

I like the mood of the above.

flighty_dreams March 28 2009, 20:58:53 UTC

Haha thanks. Like I just replied to lab_jazz, I'm trying to work on both. I've got a few more scenes of this summarized, so I could go work on it whenever I like... I'm still trying to figure out all of it though, as far as plot/ending. This was supposed to be a one-shot, but that plan went awry when I realized I could up the intrigue by starting earlier and showing the journey to that point... sigh.

And I totally blame this on you, but this story really wanted to be told in first person. It took some will to avoid that lol.

lothy March 28 2009, 03:36:58 UTC

I've bookmarked this to read another time since it's 3.36am and I need to get to bed; but I just wanted to comment to say that I love your icon :)

flighty_dreams March 28 2009, 21:00:21 UTC

I love your icon too! :) And when a plot bunny like this hits me, I can't resist adding to the never-large-enough pile of femdom fic out there, ahem.

lothy April 1 2009, 11:19:44 UTC

Ta ;)

I've just read the fic, and it was intriguing, I'll look forward to reading more whenever you get to writing it. And femdom?? Yay!

(And yes, not nearly enough femdom out there. There ought to be a campaign.)

flighty_dreams April 1 2009, 19:46:51 UTC

I know, right? I agree there should be a campaign. I'm doing my part, now other people step up!!

And yeah, that's my response too, when I see something actually say 'femdom' lol. Omg, yay!

Also, I can say happily that there should be another update very soon. I've written 2k+ more words and counting. ;) And I'm having quite a lot of fun writing this story. *grin*

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