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Spliced: Part 3 - Chapter 12A

Nov 09, 2008 08:28

TITLE: Spliced - Part 3, Chapter 12A
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slavefic, spliced, original fic, scifi

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spike7451 November 9 2008, 16:16:17 UTC

So excited to see an update. Brilliant chapter. The dream sequence was amazing.

flighty_dreams November 10 2008, 08:39:34 UTC

Thanks glad you liked the dream part! I was keeping my fingers crossed that it worked and that ppl weren't just confused by it. The boys are making progress. We'll see what happens with them... :)

Thanks for commenting. :)

dramagirl007 November 9 2008, 17:06:31 UTC

Wow I loved the dream. YAY IT'S GETTING CLOSER TO MIN TIME. YAY YAY YAY. Good work. Now for the next chapter. :)

flighty_dreams November 10 2008, 08:42:16 UTC

Hehe, someone is obsessed with getting back to Min eh! Or you just can't wait for them not to be half a galaxy apart, and back in person driving each other crazy again? (Or having lots of sex... take your pick.) :D

Glad you enjoyed the dream though, and thanks for commenting. :)

half_imagined March 18 2009, 23:33:40 UTC

Oh, no, Matt. Don't make Min a special case. If you're going to start to respect Min, please to be trying to accept all clones, you jerk.

Also-- Alex/Min's transition dreams are terrifying.

e_witness July 7 2012, 15:09:38 UTC

Whoa. So that's what happens when he switches. That is unbelievably strange. And intense. And disturbing.

His subconscious was about as subtle as an asteroid impact.

LOL. Lovely line. Somewhat related, I'm really enjoying the bits and pieces of vernacular you're slinging around. "Spiralling" as an all too appropriate term for losing one's temper or going off the deep end. "Cratering" for hitting a brick wall or a dead end. And then all the amusing analogies where you sneak in bits of world-building.