Another update.
Well, this is very differnt, imy first story I began to write was quite interesting, it really started to suck later, but I got the hang of what was bad and I fixed it, "The Illusians Bridge" is discontinued, and im actually quite glad about that because I was having a horrible time trying to find stuff to write about, it was difinetly a mind block or something like that. Thew new story im writing now it called "3029" which ive probably done lie eleven pages now, yeah thats nothing I know. Well, the story takes place in the future, and it's in year "3029" as said in the title. In the story, life has completly changed, nothing is the same anymore, even familes and styles of living. The storyI wrote is about a married couple, middle-aged, who, quote "own" four kids, they aren't their kids, they just own them. In this time in the future, people give their children away once they are born, and they are sent off to another family, and it's made sure that the family they stay with is as far away as possible. So people can own children who are all a differn't race and gender. In the particular family that Im writing about, there are four children. One child is German, one is English, One is Armenian, and one is French. There are two girls and two boys. The parents in this time have nothing to do with the children, they don't talk with them much or anything, infact, the parents don't even talk much with eacthother, they are just together for the sake of being together. Well, the story egins and takes place in their home, and they live in the United States, in Navada. The kids attend normal school and such. It's diffenitely differnt because in days today, if you go to a school in the U.S., the majority of students are from there and have a regular American accent, but in "3029" In (My story.) things are differn't and in whatever school you go to around the world, there is going to be kids from everywhere, not just that area. As far as goverment wise, they want it to be like that and they want the world to be just like the same area, and all people living together like that. (All nationalities.), but of course that isn't right.
And of course like in all stories there is a conflict and somthing that happens and enimies and everything, and yes in this story that happens, I havent fully finished writing my outline as far as all that, but I thought why not start it since I already had the beginning of the outline finished. When I finish this im going to put it on here, I mean my outline, so then people can see.
Well, if you find this story interesting at all, or worth putting a comment on, please do.
Thanks.
Sincerly,
Ashe