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fleshflutter

Disambiguation (gen-fic, 926 words, PG)

Sep 27, 2007 18:47

Originally written for spnflashfic

Disambiguation
(gen-fic, 926 words, PG)
In which Sam is nothing like the gun.

( The man behind the desk takes the register that John pushes back towards him then frowns at the signature. )

supernatural, gen, fic

Comments 59

bwhahahabeck September 27 2007, 18:42:26 UTC

omg win

I LOVE your fic. :O

fleshflutter October 1 2007, 19:46:22 UTC

Eeee! Thank you ever so much! :)
♥

tsuki_no_bara September 27 2007, 18:56:12 UTC

i really, really like this. i like how sam takes "like the gun?" as an opportunity to distance himself from his family and the hunting, i like how jessica answers him, i love dean's "awesome" after sam kills the zombie (also? EW), and i really love that in the end, sam at least accepts that this is who he is. (even if he doesn't seem particularly pleased about it, and who can blame him, if being like the gun means squishing zombie brains through the zombie's eyesockets.)

fleshflutter October 1 2007, 19:47:18 UTC

Oh I'm so so thrilled it worked for you! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting - I really appreciate it. :)

jude_91 September 27 2007, 18:57:12 UTC

Loved it!
This part particularly, cause I can picture it in my head so clearly:
He sighs and wipes his hands off on his jeans.

"Yeah," he says. "Like the gun."

Great job!

fleshflutter October 1 2007, 19:49:24 UTC

Thank you ever so much for reading and leaving such lovely feedback! It makes me very happy! :)

cdeacon September 27 2007, 18:58:03 UTC

Oh, this is absolutely wonderful. Wonderful!

Which is not very useful feedback, but that's really all I can say right now. : )

fleshflutter October 1 2007, 19:50:08 UTC

No, that's awesome feedback! Thank you ever so much for it! :)

embroiderama September 27 2007, 19:38:20 UTC

Oh, I like this a lot! Aside from the excellent point you make about Sam's realtion to his family/family name, it made me grin because my last name tends to get me the reply of "Like the [common product]?" and I often want to answer, "No, like the [far less common product]." ;)

fleshflutter October 1 2007, 19:52:04 UTC

I'm very happy it worked for you! And yes, I also have a similar nuisance with my surname - people feel compelled to hum a certain theme tune at me and I guess you know how quickly that sort of thing gets old. ;)