Comments | fleshflutter: The Old Block (gen-fic, 4232 words, PG-13)

fleshflutter

The Old Block (gen-fic, 4232 words, PG-13)

Jul 28, 2007 18:31

The Old Block
(gen-fic, 4232 words, PG-13, warnings for implied child prostitution, non-con, pedophilia)
In which Sam and Dean go for a ride with a stranger, and the stranger wishes they hadn't.

( The younger one is about the age he likes. Still a little plump, with round, rosy cheeks like a cherub's. The older one is too old but so damn pretty Stevie's willing to make an exception. )

supernatural, gen, teeny-winchesters, fic

Comments 136

littlestarling July 28 2007, 17:56:14 UTC

I'm always so happy when I see you've posted a new fic!

What a screwed up family! But Dean & Sam are serious survivors, that's the one thing their upbringing taught them for sure. Dean as a little hellion is so easy to picture, and Sam using his nice-boy persona and pretty face to fool that cop, is inspired.

This fic really illuminates their characters and their dark childhood! No wonder Sam was so adamant about Jess never finding out about his past!!! She probably would have run away screaming!

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 16:04:49 UTC

Oh I'm ever so happy that it worked for you! And I'm very pleased that the two boys came across as survivors! In short, just thank you so so much for reading and for the awesome feedback! ♥

azephirin July 28 2007, 17:57:17 UTC

Wow, that was creepy. The POV was very well done, enough that I kind of want to go pour antibacterial soap all over myself now. This is a great glimpse of the younger Winchesters-not yet the hunters they'll be later, but still competent and calculating.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 16:06:03 UTC

I'm very glad the POV worked - it was a fascinating kind of narrator to try writing! Thanks so much for reading and for commenting! :)

jasmasson July 28 2007, 18:53:26 UTC

Excellently done.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 16:06:30 UTC

Thank you ever so much! :)

saturn_girl July 28 2007, 19:09:20 UTC

I like it - a Weechestery fic where Sam and Dean get to show off how smart, brave, and tough they can be, but still manages to show us that they're kids with a lot to learn about dangerous people. Loved the last line.

fleshflutter July 31 2007, 16:07:41 UTC

No matter how well John's trained them, they're still just kids really. Thank you ever so much for reading and for commenting! I'm ever so happy it worked for you! :)

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fleshflutter July 31 2007, 16:53:48 UTC

Oh I'm ever so glad it kept you on the edge of your seat! Thank you so so much for reading and commenting so kindly! :)

kissingangelina August 9 2007, 07:03:08 UTC

I totally have to agree with every word of this. My God, talk about pins and needles. I even had to skip forward a few paragraphs just to make sure Dean wasn't hurt. And cheered for Sammy, coming to the rescue.

Loved it! And although I haven't been the biggest fan of John in the past (given how the boys had to take care of themselves so damned much), I really loved him in this fic.

Awesome!