Comments | fleshflutter: Dread the passing... (4000ish words, lots of warnings)

fleshflutter

Dread the passing... (4000ish words, lots of warnings)

Mar 11, 2008 18:15

I've gone back and forth on whether to post this or not. I wrote this when I was feeling a bit miserable and bleak. It's probably not going to be as horrifying to you lot as it was to me when I first read through what I'd written - I guess you can take the girl out of the faith, but you can't take the faith out of the girl ( Read more... )

angst, horror, supernatural, fic

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thehighwaywoman March 11 2008, 18:35:34 UTC

...

*is speechless* (in a good way -- I just absolutely cannot think of anything to say -- my mind's floating out there in a sort of white space of awe)

fleshflutter March 13 2008, 10:56:44 UTC

Oh thank you ever so much, my lovely! I am really ever so happy that it worked for you! I very much appreciate you reading and commenting! :)
♥

flawedamythyst March 11 2008, 18:45:45 UTC

Oh, wow.

That was creepy and awful and painful and yet so, so good. I almost feel sorry for Nathaniel as much as I do SamnDean, having everything twisted like that by the demons.

fleshflutter March 13 2008, 10:57:28 UTC

I'm very happy it worked for you! Thank you so so much for reading and commenting - I appreciate it a lot! :)

backinblack March 11 2008, 18:47:50 UTC

This was great, truly creepy and unsettling. <3

Oh, Well done, the angels say. You did everything we asked you too. And you did it so well too. Extra o on the first too, yeah?

fleshflutter March 13 2008, 10:58:01 UTC

Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting, and catching that typo! :)

insomnia_geek March 11 2008, 18:48:51 UTC

. . . . . . . Wow. Just, wow.
I actually feel sick, physically sick, yet at the same time amazed. I love how visceral your writing is, and this is incredibly powerful. Like a close range shot to the gut.
It may not be entirely what you wanted, but you leave me stunned nonetheless.

fleshflutter March 13 2008, 10:59:42 UTC

Oh thank you so very much for this absolutely wonderful feedback! I'm totally thrilled that it worked for you! :)

nargynargy March 11 2008, 18:56:22 UTC

This was so immediate, I felt a sense of dread and horror all the way through - and I mean that as a compliment, its so visceral, I have no words. I don't think I could read this story again but I'm in awe that you could still write this, in spite of your faith.

fleshflutter March 13 2008, 11:01:44 UTC

I'm very very happy this worked for you! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting! :)