Comments | fleshflutter: In the valley of the shadow (Sam/Jess/Madison/Dean, 1012 words, nc-17)

fleshflutter

In the valley of the shadow (Sam/Jess/Madison/Dean, 1012 words, nc-17)

Jan 26, 2008 21:28

Don't watch Heart late at night while you're in a weird mood.

In the valley of the shadow
(Sam/Jess/Madison/Dean and variations thereof, 1012 words, nc-17, warning for zombies)

( Their voices are pitched too low for Dean to catch the words but he figures it’s just girl-talk interspersed with the occasional soft, throaty giggle. He doesn’t think there’s enough in their heads for them to be saying anything important. Probably just dust and maggots. )

angst, horror, supernatural, sam/dean/jess/madison, evil!sam, fic, sam/dean

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juicephine January 26 2008, 21:39:43 UTC

Oh my GOD. I think this is the creepiest fic I've ever read. Creepy and SO AWESOME. That last line, Jesus CHRIST.

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fleshflutter January 31 2008, 16:49:03 UTC

Oh I'm absolutely thrilled that it worked for you! Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! :)
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giandujakiss January 26 2008, 21:50:10 UTC

Yikes. That is - deeply disturbing.

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 16:49:58 UTC

So glad it worked for you! Thanks ever so for reading! :)

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fleshflutter January 31 2008, 16:50:54 UTC

I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Thank you ever so much for reading and commenting! :)

__hyacinthus January 26 2008, 21:58:18 UTC

“Practice makes perfect,” he tells Dean.

Even though I should have seen it coming, the last 2 lines were like a punch to the gut. A pleasant--if any such feeling can be pleasant--one, but a complete and utter surprise until I went back and re-read it again. Awesome stuff.

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 16:51:44 UTC

I'm totally delighted that it worked for you! Thank you very much for the really kind feedback! :)

2ndary_author January 26 2008, 22:05:06 UTC

"You find them creepy, don't you?" *I* sure as hell do! I had to stop halfway through to turn on two more lamps. This was positively eerie, both in the details, right down to the verb choice (spidered?), and in the big picture (this is bittersweet gone rotten: all Sam wants is his brother and the girls and a little wooden table, and now he's too powerful for anyone to tell him no). This is brilliant...and I can probably never read it again;)

fleshflutter January 31 2008, 16:52:57 UTC

Oooh that's awesome feedback to get! I'm really happy it worked for you and very grateful to you for reading! And Ms Word absolutely hated me using 'spidered' but I liked it so told Word to stick it. ;)