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Fic: Family

Jun 29, 2009 23:47

Title: Family
Author: Erin (erinm_4600)
Characters/Pairings: The Team (specifically Jules)
Word Count: 400
Prompt: 03 Family
Rating: G
Warnings: pre-series
Spoilers: None that I know of...
Summary: It's like being back with her brothers...
Disclaimer: The original characters belong to CBS and their respective actors. The OCs are mine.
Betas: None
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author: erinm_4600, prompt 03: family, genre: gen, rating: pg, characters: the team, character: jules

Comments 8

wordsflow June 30 2009, 04:29:00 UTC

Welcome to the ficcing world of Flashpoint! XD And now on to the story... IT'S SO ADORABLE. I started out feeling bad for Jules but then the end! Eeee, squishes the team. ♥ Great job on your first fic, and I hope we can see more from you!

(I do have a little canon gripe though... Spike had been the rookie of the team, up until Sam arrived, as seen in Haunting the Barn! If Spike was replaced with Roli, the guy from the pilot episode, it would be pitch-perfect!)

erinm_4600 June 30 2009, 12:23:48 UTC

This is helpful! \o/

I have to admit that the brain is a bit frazzled these days and I don't have quick access to the facts, etc.

I will edit accordingly ;)

paranoid_woman June 30 2009, 15:30:52 UTC

That was super cute! I love the concept of this drabble - how Jules started out thinking she wouldn't really be accepted and then how she reacted to the surprise the team had for her.

I love when writers let us see things what might have happened in the characters' past. This was really good and it felt very real. You wrote Jules so well!

Welcome to the comm! C'mon, take a seat, we want to see/read more... *g*

erinm_4600 June 30 2009, 15:47:39 UTC

I've been contemplating the other side of it - something tells me the idea was Ed's...

*sends cookies* :D

paranoid_woman June 30 2009, 16:26:35 UTC

I think it would be very Ed to do this... so I agree. *nods*

*receives cookies and starts making some to send you so you write more fic* Awesome!

erinm_4600 June 30 2009, 16:45:34 UTC

\O/

lillyg June 30 2009, 22:38:15 UTC

Welcome to the community! That's a great fic to begin with! How Jules has been integrated in the team. That's adorable! Hope you're going to write a new one soon!

erinm_4600 June 30 2009, 22:46:34 UTC

Hope you're going to write a new one soon!

Me too! Thanks for the warm welcome :D