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Circuit Breaker

Mar 16, 2009 15:59

Circuit Breaker.
NC-17. 1,598 words. Skins.
Tony/Michelle/Sid. Set series one, before the bus accident.

Skins kink meme! Prompt was: Tony/Sid/Michelle - Sid gets Tony's sloppy seconds

( Michelle watches with half-lidded eyes, lets him get between her thighs and snorts when he holds her hip too hard, awkwardly over the bruises Tony left, like a jealous kid grabs his brother’s new toy. )

the country inside my head, skins

Comments 14

letmypidgeonsgo March 16 2009, 06:17:03 UTC

OP loves you :)

flash_indie March 16 2009, 06:33:09 UTC

Haha, I'm glad! :D

likecharity March 16 2009, 11:06:01 UTC

♥♥♥

I love this. I was hoping someone would write that prompt. And it's so good, it's so hot and SO IC. You've written Tony perfectly as the wanker he was pre-bus accident. One little thing I particularly loved was Sid thinking of Michelle's tits as perfect, because Tony was always going on about them being funny-looking, haha. I love that he tells her she's beautiful and stuff, but calls out Cassie's name, and how at the end he rationalises it all and leaves. That's spot-on Sid, really. XD

Wonderful!!

flash_indie March 16 2009, 22:47:00 UTC

Thanks so much! I was kind of hoping someone else would fill the prompt, but they didn't, haha, so I finally caved and wrote it. I've mentioned before how much I loved their dynamic in the first series. It was good in the second, but it wasn't the same due to the bus accident. I just loved this idea of Tony being this massive wanker and Sid being the nice, kind of hopeless guy that was definitely in love with his best friend's girl, but maybe a little in love with his best friend too. It was such an interesting thing, and I love Sid and Cassie too, particularly in the first series, so I couldn't resist slipping them in there too. :D

So yes, I'm glad you liked it!

myhagridromance March 16 2009, 11:43:02 UTC

Oh my GOD this was amazing. Just the thing you need when you're ill and feeling sorry for yourself. :]

flash_indie March 16 2009, 22:32:06 UTC

Thank you! I hope you're feeling better. :)

tanisafan March 16 2009, 13:26:25 UTC

Oh my goodness, YES. This could've fit right into the first series, perfectly. You've written them so perfectly in character, although I especially think Michelle's portayal was very fitting. And Sid, poor Sid, wanting her so much but calling out Cassie's name and probably confusing himself horribly in the process <3. Oh, my heart.

This was excellent!

flash_indie March 16 2009, 22:39:39 UTC

Thanks so much! They had such a great dynamic that first series, I mean, it wasn't healthy, but it was such an interesting relationship. It was fun to revisit that series as well, as I'm so into the new one at the moment. :D

I'm glad you liked it too!

bloodygoodgirl March 16 2009, 17:25:43 UTC

So awesome and a perfect match for the prompt. You hit all the right steps in their relationship and just so good.

flash_indie March 16 2009, 22:34:58 UTC

Thanks so much! They had such an interesting dynamic on the show. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.