Comments | flash_indie: Fic: First Time

flash_indie

Fic: First Time

Aug 06, 2006 17:52

Title: First Time
Rating: PG
Fandom: Bleach (Ichi/Hime)

All the usual disclaimers apply.

The first time they kiss, Ichigo is taken by surprise.

He’s bleeding and filthy, and every ounce of him burns with pain and anxiety and something that hurts the roots of his hair to the jagged edges of his toenails. His heart is thrashing in the pit of his ( Read more... )

the country inside my head, bleach

Comments 19

the_hoozah August 6 2006, 08:57:24 UTC

aww, i really liked this. It was sweet and sad and.... and really beautiful! i'm adding to my memories!

flash_indie August 7 2006, 06:15:51 UTC

Thanks, glad you enjoyed. ^^

ai_kizu August 6 2006, 10:42:40 UTC

That was really sweet. I love the way you showed the emotion.

flash_indie August 7 2006, 06:16:13 UTC

Thank you!

kumagoro_usagi August 6 2006, 13:03:34 UTC

Bah. The cute.

flash_indie August 7 2006, 06:16:24 UTC

Eheh, ^^

fitchpouch August 6 2006, 22:05:18 UTC

Oh, that was really good. There was so much detail and it was just so pretty. And it was your first time, too! Congrats, and you should keep writing. :)

flash_indie August 7 2006, 06:17:41 UTC

Thanks ^^. I really hope to write some more, coz I have just so much love for the ichihime fandom.

(In reality, I think I just love Orihime in general, eheh!)

covet August 6 2006, 23:27:33 UTC

she tastes like ice cream and octopus and Tabasco sauce, and maybe a hint of the cherry lip-gloss that Rukia steals from Yuzu.

So, basically what you're saying is that Orihime has been making out with Rukia.

flash_indie August 7 2006, 06:18:42 UTC

Rukia wanted to see what Ichigo was raving about...y'know, if she could see into the future, coz this is Ichihime first kiss and gah, I have no idea what I'm saying anymore.

^^

utenatai August 9 2006, 23:11:04 UTC

What I want to know is how Ichigo knows what Rukia tastes like.
Is there threesome lurking in the background here?