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flash_indie

Keep The Lights Off

Jun 26, 2008 11:08

Keep The Lights Off.
1,886 words. The Cab. Gen - pre-GSF.
For dawn_afterglow . Happy early birthday? eheh.

( “This is so gay,” Johnson says, but he’s climbing over as well, slower and quieter than Ian and Cash, and he gets around to curl into Marshall’s side. )

the country inside my head, the cab, bandom

Comments 66

inawonderland June 26 2008, 01:38:34 UTC

Fantastic, I love the atmosphere and intimacy.

(Singer pauses, wait’s a beat while Marshall moves a little... You don't need an apostrophe in waits.)

flash_indie June 26 2008, 01:45:24 UTC

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

(And yes, ahah, how embarrassing. ^^ Fixed though, so thank you.)

inawonderland June 26 2008, 02:19:07 UTC

You're very welcome.

aerynvala June 26 2008, 01:45:11 UTC

awww, that was adorable :D

flash_indie June 26 2008, 01:45:39 UTC

thank you! :)

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flash_indie June 26 2008, 02:43:16 UTC

Thank you so much.

eckerlilas June 26 2008, 02:10:46 UTC

Oh man. Cute boys snuggling and comforting. LOVE IT.

flash_indie June 26 2008, 02:45:54 UTC

Ahah, thank you! I totally refuse to believe that snuggling is not an important part of the day in the cab. Seriously.

trohmaniac13 June 26 2008, 02:16:40 UTC

i just; i really loved that. (:
'specailly this line:

Marshall just buries his face in Singer’s hair, fingers tapping his ribcage like they’re the keys of his piano.

i read that line like, three times. (:
lovely work, bb!

flash_indie June 26 2008, 02:47:36 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. (I kinda like that line too ^^)