Original piece

[flash_indie]

This is a part of something more. Original fic.

Comments

[galaxyaway]

That was so beautifully worded and so emotional; I could feel it. I really did like this, that I feel terrible for not being able to provide you with a better comment than this.

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

[justhush]

I'm not quite sure what I feel about this.

“Thing about love,” she says, “is that it’s supposed to stick around in the morning.”

I adore that line. I think it does a great job of summarizing the whole thing, their relationship, and... just, everything. sometimes, even life in general, I think.

It's the things that are supposed to last, that don't.

[flash_indie]

It's the things that are supposed to last, that don't.

That's sort of exactly what I was trying to say and thank you for capturing that, for getting it. I always worry that what I'm going for gets lost in translation.

Thank you.

[justhush]

I'm glad I got the message. That was a really interesting thing the read, because usually, as soon as I read something, I get a mental thumbs up or down, or something.

I really loved that piece. But it took me a really long time for it to hit me just how much I did.

[blushandrecover]

AND since I forgot to comment right away, I also forgot to tell you how much I love this. Thank you for gracing our little comm; it means a lot.

Like everything of yours, this is so heartbreakingly real. It's tangible and it hurts, but it's a medicinal pain. And possibly the kind you get hooked on and maybe lose the narcotics for.

[flash_indie]

Thank you so, so much. Your comments always leave me with the warm and fuzzies. So, thank you, again, always. ^^

[be_a_muse_d]

i love it^^ what else is there to say?

[vesperalight]

Lovely, lovely. And I got it, I felt it! Fantastically written.