Fic: Bottle Up Old Love (or Pete's New House)

Aug 20, 2007 08:15


Title: Bottle Up Old Love (or Pete's New House)
Rating: PG.
Fandom: FOB (Patrick/Pete-implied, although could be gen).

Thing is, Patrick never moves in with Pete.

Not officially.

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Pete will always tell Patrick that he is an essential part of a jigsaw, a necessary fraction of a picture. Pete will say that it doesn’t matter how long and tall and ( Read more... )

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smittten August 19 2007, 22:41:09 UTC
This was amazing.

he’s just like Pete, miles of tissue and lost skin, wrapping around bone and muscle, heart and heat.

“He was lonely when we were together too.”

So full of heart-wrenching hurt.

Patrick says, “at home,” before he can think anything else of it.

And sentimental loveliness.

Just. I loved it so much.

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flash_indie August 20 2007, 09:24:42 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. ^^

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lafeelivresque August 19 2007, 23:20:43 UTC
I could not love this more. So many beautiful, infinitely perfect details. And fuckedup!Pete, how I love you, with your skin-tightening emotion and oh.

I could quote this whole thing back to you. Instead, I shall put it in my mems and quote it repeatedly back to myself.

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pyraterose August 20 2007, 03:23:04 UTC
that was absolutely stunningly beautiful. honestly.

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flash_indie August 20 2007, 09:25:20 UTC
Thank you.

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old_plain_me August 20 2007, 05:25:14 UTC
You are so amazing. You never cease to amaze me, really.
Im in love with your way with words, and I've already told you that...but God! Incredible work. The characters were so...real and beautiful.
You know Iloveyou so...^^
Memories!!!

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flash_indie August 22 2007, 09:53:46 UTC
Ahah, your comments never cease to leave a smile on my face. *hugs*

Thank you so much and, y'know, *grins*.

I love you right on back.

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xxdance August 20 2007, 06:20:40 UTC
oooh that last line! so, so good.

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flash_indie August 22 2007, 09:54:43 UTC
Ahah, thank you so much! ^^

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