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flash_indie

Fic: This Love is Not Obedient

May 25, 2007 08:15

Title: This Love Is Not Obedient (it has its own agenda) (1/4)
Rating: PG? M?
Fandom: FOB P!atd (Patrick/Pete, Brendon/Ryan)

( Ryan has an oil-painting face, but Pete, maybe he’s one canvas short of a masterpiece. )

the country inside my head, panic at the disco, bandom, fall out boy

Comments 7

strange_house May 31 2007, 05:54:29 UTC

i love this!
i can only read the first chapter right now
but i cant wiat to read the rest
its really good^^

flash_indie June 13 2007, 07:02:10 UTC

Thank you so much! ^^

yay_for_gays June 22 2007, 03:22:09 UTC

Hahahahahaha!! God I Hate Fucking psychotic paperclip!
LOL! Its so Annoying! Loving the story!! PETE!!

flash_indie June 26 2007, 02:05:03 UTC

Ahah, yes. The paperclip in microsoft word has always pissed me off. ^^

fobulouso June 22 2007, 07:57:28 UTC

Ok, so don't kill me now, but when I first read about Pete bringing Ryan in, I thought you were talking about a girl. *dies*

I loved the whole "Why aren't you under the desk" part. Made me laugh. Hysterically.

But you described everybody so realistically and awesomely.
*thumbs up*

flash_indie June 26 2007, 02:05:24 UTC

Thank you so much!

queenhinata June 30 2007, 17:31:12 UTC

Hehe, very funny.