Fic: I've kept you like a secret

[flash_indie]

Title: I've Kept You like a Secret
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: Harry Potter (Remus/Sirius)
A/N: For dawn_afterglowwho requested it (and is a million sorts of lovely) and for all those who ever wanted me to write more Harry Potter fic.

Comments

[tresa_cho]

Hum. I really, really liked it because I think you captured Sirius really well, but the ending is just ringing wrong for some reason. I can't really put a finger on it, but perhaps if the entire revelation took a bit longer it might flow better. This is just constructive criticism, because I really do like how you wrote Sirius. The end was just a bit off. Great job.

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And yeah, uh, I had some issues with the ending, I was wondering if the whole thing was maybe a little drawn out, so I might have rushed it a little unintentionally. I don't know. *shrugs* Thank you though.

[trippypeas]

i really liked this..it's been so long since i've gotten to read any RemusXSirius..i'v emissed it..

[flash_indie]

Thank you so much. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[an_instinct]

I think this was very, very beautiful -- almost poetic. The ending did seem a little rushed, but overall, very good. Thank you.

[flash_indie]

Thank you, your welcome, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^^

[dannawhin]

... and now you're writing R/S. Ye gads, we are spoilt!

Lovely lovely lovely. Faultless characterisation. Longing without desperation. Just beautiful.

I love you and want to have your babies.

[flash_indie]

Love you back, and babies? Babies are good, I'm all for babies. ^^

Thank you so, so much. *hugs* Glad you enjoyed it.

[dannawhin]

Kewl ^_~

[molsymo]

oh, this is really fantastic. god, when sirius finally gives up and gives remus space... my chest aches a bit from that:) and i loved your details and snippets of history between the boys. lovely!

[flash_indie]

Guh, thank you so, so much! ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.