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Jan 01, 2007 03:04

Title: Between Us. (2/2)
Rating: M (mentions of rape and murder, and instances of domestic violence)
Fandom: Original (gen, het if you squint and, y'know, look sideways.)

( “Your eyes are very honest.” Oscar says, and he runs his pretty fingers through her hair, catches the black strands. “and you are most certainly not fine.” )

the country inside my head

Comments 9

clipsie January 5 2007, 06:10:31 UTC

*cries* That was beautiful.

flash_indie January 6 2007, 00:02:54 UTC

*hands you a tissue* Thank you. ^^

dawn_afterglow January 5 2007, 22:20:54 UTC

Uh...I love you. Seriously. The beta in me wants to correct all the little errors I noticed but it was so beautifully written and I...don't really know what else to say that I don't have the heart to mention them anymore than I already have. To ruin the mood, I suppose. ♥ You're such a lovely, lovely writer.

flash_indie January 6 2007, 00:07:12 UTC

Thank you so, so much!

This was actually written for a friend. I'd asked her what she wanted for christmas, and she demanded that I write her something about a little girl creating a world inside her head to escape a crappy homelife. I haven't had the oppurtunity to give it to her yet, but I kinda wanted a second oppinion before I gave it to her.

I don't know if it's what she had in mind given the prompt, but...oh well.

Thank you so much, I love you too! ^^

And about the errors, *eep* sorry. I tend to miss things, even when I self beta. I've got you for that now, though huh? Heh.

be_a_muse_d March 18 2007, 20:03:24 UTC

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normally, i don't read originals. but i really like your writing style, so i thought why don't you try it and soon i couldn't tell anymore if i was crying because of my tried eyes or because of your fiction. your stories are just awesome.

you said you posted one of your originals. have you posed others i just didn't find?

flash_indie March 18 2007, 22:09:16 UTC

Oh wow, thank you so much. I didn't think anyone really read this fic, so it was a nice surprise to wake up to your comment this morning.

Ahah, I haven't really posted much of my original stuff. I get pretty self-conscious about a lot of it, so...I dunno. I posted something the other day which I had to write for school. It's called 'Cancer'. It should be like, my second most recent entry or something. If you're still interested, I could probably post some of my other stuff. *shrugs* ^^

be_a_muse_d March 19 2007, 21:47:12 UTC

it would be really great if you could^^
please do^.^

lemonsherry May 26 2007, 04:07:04 UTC

So beautiful and heartbreaking; I cried. And I think im falling in love with your writing, just so you know.

emily_492 May 10 2010, 03:01:20 UTC

wow...you are an amazing writer. I agree, post more originals; they're heart-wrenching. In a good way, of course :)