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flamyshine

How to break a heart

Jun 13, 2010 11:22

Title: How to break a heart
Pairing: Andy Roddick/Roger Federer
Other character: Mike Bryan
Rating: PG-13
Warning: angst, profanity
Word count: 5,146
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Life has been hard on Andy, and he has been hard on himself.
Author’s note: The story is in Andy’s POV and set during ( Read more... )

tennis slash, how to break a heart

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flamyshine June 14 2010, 08:23:09 UTC

Oh, how very kind of you :) Your words are making me so happy =D Thank you so much for reading!

mtmed9273 June 13 2010, 20:21:07 UTC

wonderful.. really wonderful. I loved. I want continuation :)

flamyshine June 14 2010, 08:59:18 UTC

You always have the kindest words :) Thank you!

Unfortunately, I can't really think of what could happen next. Hopefully, one day, they'll be hurting much less :)

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flamyshine June 14 2010, 10:40:32 UTC

Oh dear, your words are too kind for me :) Thank you. I'm usually not up for much angst, but in this case, I suppose the ending was better this way. It's always so difficult to end a story properly so I'm very happy that you liked the ending. I put a lot of thinking into the dream scene, so yay =D ( ... )

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flamyshine June 14 2010, 10:54:04 UTC

Lol, love how you emphasized "OH THE ANGST!!!" I still don't get the charm of reading a story that 'hurts so much' in which your 'poor Andy is so broken', but I guess it works for angsty bday girls! =D I'm always a bit nervous after posting a bday fic, so I'm utterly relieved that you seemingly enjoyed it. Thank you for your open-mindedness and patience *Flamyhugs*

And, yeah, God bless Randy. Me being me, it did cross my mind to fix his heart and give him something to hope for, but well, I guess it was better to end this way. At least, I hope so!

Aww, don't worry about repaying any favors (although it would be really great to see you writing again!). It's just a shame that we didn't get to congratulate your birthday online. We all miss you too :)

P.S: Yep, I do have a Lacoste fic that I'm working on. I suddenly have so much work irl that it might take a while D: *hugs*

Hello! federicos July 7 2010, 22:16:16 UTC

This is just brilliant!!!! Thanks a lot...I hope you don't mind I added you as a friend!
federico

Ah, sorry! flamyshine July 14 2010, 15:22:11 UTC

Oh, I'm so sorry about the late reply. For some reason, my LJ didn't send the comment over to my mailbox so I read it late. Sorry! Thank you very much for the sweet words on the fic, and of course, I don't mind getting added on LJ :)