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flamyshine

ATP Kindergarten (Chapter 28)

Jan 13, 2010 04:14

Title: ATP Kindergarten
Main pairings: Djokovic/A. Murray, Gasquet/Gulbis, Nadal/Del Potro, Federer/Roddick
Other characters: Safin, Henman, Ferrero, Tursunov, Wawrinka, Moya
Rating: G
Warning: Possible destruction of innocence
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: The exhibition match between Coach Andy ( Read more... )

tennis slash, atp kindergarten

Comments 13

vastian_steel January 13 2010, 05:53:37 UTC

love the parts with Andy, Roger and Richie.

flamyshine January 13 2010, 11:03:49 UTC

Thank you for the kind words! =D I really enjoy writing about those three :)

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flamyshine January 14 2010, 01:04:04 UTC

Ok, I admit it. I think I've admitted it before but anyway, yes, I love torturing Randy XD What can I say? It almost writes by itself!So far, he's doing a fine job keeping Richie away from nc-17 stuff so caps off to him!

Marat naturally has an overwhelming presence wherever he goes. I'm not saying that Randy has any less but in his mind, I thought it could bother him for quite some time. Well, probably until he feels like he's really a part of the Federer family. He should move in at some point but then, he should go to the States and see his family and friends when he's not working for the school.

I'm trying not to mess up my last Marat/JC scenes. Hopefully, I'll get them working :) Thank you so much as always *Hugs*

krisherdown January 13 2010, 23:31:41 UTC

Loved how the kids helped Coach Andy get over the loss, as well as the solution (from Stanny, no less) about Richie's problem. Though boo to Marat for manipulating that kid into a tough choice in the first place.

Well done.

flamyshine January 14 2010, 00:52:24 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad that you liked Stanny's solution XD I personally hope he will find a cheaper way to impress Richie, haha. Since Marat could use some love in this story, I'll have to sacrifice(?) a teacher XD

Thanks for the comment =D It's always very helpful to know what worked!

speaking_red January 14 2010, 13:58:43 UTC

YAY, UPDATE!

speaking_red January 14 2010, 14:03:02 UTC

Poor Randy, it's more than just a dream! :(
And explain the strangled groan to Richie, I think he deserves certain compensation XD

Hmm, three tournaments a year? That's great! Rafa/Juma will have two more chances to win the double <3

Have I said that I love your Gael before? Banner and rap, Marat should give some credit to him XD
Maybe Gael could get a Coach Marat ride, no?

More Marat/JC scene, please? *superhugs*

flamyshine January 17 2010, 12:31:11 UTC

Sorry for the late reply. I was sick and couldn't bring myself to reply. Sorry! :)

Lol, since people think that Randy needs a compensation, I guess he should have one then =D And, yeah, I assume the school has tournaments per surface (not including plexicushion, just hard court XD). Given how slow the story is going, I might have to speed things up after the winter break part.

Anyway, I'm glad you like Gael in here! He's a sub-character but I've been trying to make him lively as possible XD And, yes, there will definitely be more Marat/JC scenes. I have to find a way to get them together soon.

As always, your warm words are very much appreciated. Thank you so much :) *superhugs*

speaking_red January 17 2010, 14:28:09 UTC

Awww I hope you get better as fast as possible!! ♥

slyreflection January 15 2010, 23:55:41 UTC

<3<3<3<3<3

Sorry for tehe late comment! This chapter was great. Lol, A-Rod got tormented a little there, between Richie and the loss, but it was nice to see that he finally realizes and appreciates that he's the one who gets Roger (and Richie) in the end!

Ehehehe, the three teachers are really such saps XD. But the boys are so cute I guess it's only right. I can't believe the boys divided themselves up, I bet Marat and Andy attention whores lmao just at that up XD.

OTP SQUEEE ^______^. I love their conversation; Marat is (surprisingly) nice even when he's being a tiny bit mean and creepy (what a line, "it’s hot to see you so dedicated to the boys" XD XD XD. *shakes head*) and Juanqui obviously needs to get out more, it'll be great for him ;).

*SUPERHUGS FLAMY*

flamyshine January 17 2010, 12:37:13 UTC

Aww, please don't apologize for late comments. (Wait, didn't we say this all the time last year? XD Let's not repeat this!) As my muse, Richie, is doing better on tour, I feel like I'm slowly dealing with my stories a bit better as well.

Yep, I must enjoy tormenting poor Randy. I don't know why I enjoy it though. It's not like I want to enjoy it XD It just happens! (Like it does with Marat...) But hey, he has Roger and Richie. Everything will be fine for him. Whereas with Marat, I still have a lot of work to do. Juanqui never comes around so easily!

I agree that Marat's line was creepy XD I hope he won't say such things too much and upset the teacher who actually gets how his brain(? mind?) works. For once, I'm not really confident at writing them together XD Oh well, I'll have to figure out a way to make it work :)

Thank you so much, Sly. It's a joy to have you back in the tennisfic world *superhugs*