You will never walk alone

[flamyshine]

Title: You will never walk alone
Pairing: Mario Ancic/Juan Carlos Ferrero
Other character: Novak Djokovic
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 6,199
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Warning: Angst throughout most of the story and not much dialogue.
Summary: Mario and Juan Carlos take their usual post-dinner walk.
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[carolina30363]

loved it...really loved it...

[flamyshine]

Thank you so much! It's so nice to read that you liked it :)
Thanks for the kind words.

[_runningmascara]

i really like the tone of this fic, it flows really well :)

[flamyshine]

Thank you so much for the encouraging words. I'm flattered, especially hearing it from a great writer :)

[flamyshine]

I love how you call my name almost every time (last time, you even called me three times in one comment XD) in a comment :) Yes, I'm all ears!

As you noticed, I usually enjoy writing dialogues much more but it really was a nice change for me as well. I don't want to get bored with my own stories so it's nice to write something different every once in a while :)

Yep, Mario is all about angst in here XD That's how the birthday girl likes him. And, I couldn't resist sneaking my OTP into the story. I hope she doesn't mind XD

Aww, I can only offer you lots of flamyhugs for all the nice words, but you know that I don't like writing angst XDD It makes me moody and sad. But then, I guess it won't hur to write one every three months or so :) *mega flamyhugs (Not sure if you'll want these XD)*

[flamyshine]

Aww, the birthday girl likes angst so poor Mario had to suffer like that XD Yeah, I felt like the story never ended when I was writing XD So long, even for me D=

In fact, I'm the one who suck at those doll machines XD Too bad I don't have a Mario to help me out! Ahaha, I couldn't resist sneaking my OTP in. I hope Nole picked a nice doll and got a nice reward =D

Thank you for such an encouraging comment. I really appreciate it, thanks *hugs*

[slyreflection]

Awwwww, Mario. *huggles* It's so massively angsty and yet fluffy at the same time. The part about taking their walk and their relationship being over when their hands let go of each other just blew me away.
Yes, it’s that frown that drives me crazy. It took me quite some time to realize that I’m actually into his frowns.
OMO that's actually... scarily true! XD Heh, and the purr. lolol Juanqui is a vampire-feline bwhahaha
Mario just tortures himself, doesn't he? *Pats him* He gets a happy ending, though, yay. :) The bears = so cute.
*Hugs* <3 you Flamy.

PS. At the very end of the story you have the line "What an honest and pathetic answer. It’s true that I walk alone but I didn’t have to give it away like that." repeated twice- Im thinking that you only mean to have the second version with the longer paragraph there? Just though you might want to check. :)

[flamyshine]

First things first, thank you so much for letting me know about those repetitive sentences. You're right; only the second ones had to be there. Seriously, the war between me and lj will never end XD

Well, you know me, I can't just leave angst angsty even if it's long XD I always feel better with a happy ending or at least an open ending. Ahaha, yeah, I always get to see Juanki frown for some reason. I guess it's the sunlight (So, he really is a vampfeline that doesn't like the sun? XD We'll never leave him human, will we? XD)

As for the bears, I hope they don't fight too much and give their parents a hard time XD (Why can't I reply seriously today? Strange but I hope you'll understand *megahugs*)

Thank you very much for the nice comment =D