A delicious day to love

Jan 08, 2009 03:35


Title: A delicious day to love
Pairing: Novak Djokovic/Ernests Gulbis
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 3,556
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: The couple deals with the win and loss of their match together.
Author’s note: It is an Ernests POV story, dedicated to my dearest friend jeu_set_match. I hope you enjoy it :)

A delicious day to love )

nolernie, tennis slash, a delicious day to love

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jeu_set_match January 7 2009, 20:06:20 UTC
There's not enough "w" in the world to describe how sweet that fic was X3
Thank you so much for the dedication, I don't deserve all that love T_T.
I just love how right Nolernie feels when you're writing it, they just looks like, you know, a real couple, everything they do is so sincere!

I love how you put all those little details here and there, it makes it even more believable. And all the crazy going on XDD
Shaving thighs! 08' shirt! XDDD AND OF COURSE

READING THE FUTURE IN NOLE'S CHEST HAIR! I can't believe you wrote thatXDDDDDD



AHAHAHAHA

Awwww you mention his freckles! cutest thing on tour! I'm kinda jealous, I'd like to kiss them too ahahaha!

And you know what I like? Ernie's calling Richie "Richard" it contrasts so well with Nole's Richie". (It's always better than Bitchard XD).
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Here's some passages that really caught my attention:

"“Your butt definitely got bigger, Ernie. I told you that you had too many cupcakes at Christmas.”"

Yep, definitively. Cupcake abuse. It's only fair, why would I be the only one having a bigger butt after Xmas and that JCFerrero Rocher orgy XDD

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"“Well, I didn’t see you complain last night.” I clearly remember how much time and effort he spent on and in my butt last night."

OMG FLAMY! Your OTP is making you write stuff you wouldn't have written 1 year ago XD. Awww bless them.

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"I know that, dear. Why does he think I put all that pricey body cream after each shower?

“Oh, I am?” I pretend that I don’t know what he’s talking about."

Just awesome Ernie impersonation XD That little devil ahahaha.
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"He gives me a face but I know that he doesn’t mind. We are way past being insecure about our ugly looks. We’re in love."

Wow I don't know what to say about that, but I'm going to memorize it faure shaure! It brings such a broad smile on my face ^______^

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"I don’t know what his fans think, but I personally think that he has just the right amount of hair on his chest. I even use his chest hair to read the future; usually to find out if I would win my next match."

I just had to quote some of those XD. Is the amount of hair on his chest as perfect as Andy's ankles?

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"“Who says that I’ll pick only one of them?”"

AHAH! At the same time or not? XD

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You did very well with hat one, considering how hard Ernie is to write, putting yourself in his head could have been suicide, but you just did it brilliantly.

Thank you so much for that fic. *HUGZILLA*

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flamyshine January 9 2009, 08:28:36 UTC

Well, first off, you deserve so much more for all you've done for me, but well, too bad I can only give you stories like this XD On a more serious note, I can't be happier to know that you enjoyed it. You know how much I was angry with this fic, so really, I love how you love my stories, hehe =D

And, of course, Nolernie feels right XD They even have the perfect name! No pairing name can beat Nolernie, in my opinion!

As for the little details, you helped me out with most of them, so I should thank you for that :D Honestly, I can't believe I haven't written about Novak's chest hair earlier. Perhaps I was too busy reading my future in it XD *hides from Ernie* Oh, I love those hypnotizing whirl you drew on him XD No way that you could escape from your fate! XD

I'd kill to kiss Ernie's freckles. But I think Novak must be torn each time to decide where to kiss him! Ernie looks adorable everywhere! (Well, at least, all the parts that we could see till now *cough*)

Oh, I think I'm enjoying a little too much writing about little devilish Ernie XD Now that I look back, he was quite like that in "Practice makes perfect", "Driving date" and in "ATPK" as well XD I can't help it XD It's just too much fun not to write him jealous/devious.

Aww, it's awesome that you liked the "not insecure about ugly looks anymore" part. I kinda liked it and it looked like it could fit pretty nicely with Nolernie :)

And, well, I still believe nothing could be more perfect than Randy's ankles, but hmm, maybe Roger's hair. But the tricky thing is that hair grow while ankles rather rest the same. It's probably a bit unfair for Roger's hair XD Anyway, I do think Nole has the right amount of hair on his chest XD What can I say? I'm totally into him, so bite me if you don't agree XD

Yeah, I felt awkward trying to write in Ernie's POV but well, I'm pretty much a headcase myself as well, so maybe it worked out all right XD Again, I'm super thrilled that you liked the story and congratulations on your personal joy :D *megahugs*

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