Appetite (Chapter 17)
Title: Appetite
Pairings: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic, David Ferrer/Andy Murray, Carlos Moya/Tommy Haas
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: The six players go to Saipan for their off-season vacation.
Author's note: Given the storyline, I guess the next chapter will be the last one (apart from ( Read more... )
First, i felt like Andy, because I had to look up where Saipan was XD
Poor Carlos having to patronize everybody XD Hey, Charly, they are adults too you know XD
But I admit the endless teasing is too tempting.
I laughed so much during that chapter XD I mean, come on Pics XD
HELLO SAIPAN! LMAO
I'm sorry, Pics, but Andy will never get a tan. NEVER. Get used to your little powder fairy.
Aw I want to do a water war with them X3333
I *swear word*ING LOLD AT THAT BANANA BOAT.
TOTALLY UNEXPECTED FUNNY GIANT PHALLIC OBJECT WAS UNEXPECTED AND GIGANTICALLY PHALLIC.
FFFFFFFFFF AHAHAHAH
Carlos and Tommy are like 2 grannies XD Really guys, you're so young lol, go make sand castles, or play "Burry your boyfriend up to his neck and put a bucket on his head"lol.
A Pics is hidden in this picture, will you find it? XD
Rafa and Nole diving was su cote ahhhh my poor brain loved the nice images that fic put in my head, all that sun and water feels so peaceful ^_____^
And the passage with the ugly fish was priceless XDDDDD
And awwwww NEMO!!!!!!!
NEMO!!!!!!
Nemo looking beyond pissed lolololol
I loved the holiday feeling I had reading the last part, it brings so many memories and makes me crave for more holidays with friends X3. And I want a Gang barbecue now O=
Super sweet chapter. I can't believe the serie is already ending =( I'll be sure to enjoy the last chapter to the max =D
I feel like I started reading it like last month or so. I only find relief in the knowledge that whatever you'll come up with next, it'll be even better X3
*HUGZILLA*
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First things first, I have no words to tell you how sorry I am for replying this late. No excuses, I'm just sorry T_T *superhugs* So I'll try to make it up to you for trying my best to leave the most decent comment I can come up with :)
Well, I can't help making poor Ferru's image as childish as possible XD Of course, he has to say hi to an island XD I love the sky and sun behind Ferru who's smiling like he's THE HSP of all HSPs :D
Awww, did you call Andy "powder fairy"? Awwww, that word is just too cute!! I think that water war drawing is my favorite one here :D Of course, Andy hates water getting in the way of his perfect fluffy hair XDD And, Ferru won't care about his hair since whatever happens, he knows that Andy will still be pretty XD *dies laughing*
I swear that I didn't intend anything by writing about that banana-boat. It's not a symbol of anything, they just went to an island and had fun with a banana-boat XD (Why do I feel the urge to even explain this? XD) By the way, Rafa's face is priceless XDD I'm sure Nole made it up for him afterwards *cough*
Wow! You captured Tommy's hair so well!! 0.0 It's amazing. That HSP looks totally handsome :D I'd kill to be in Carlos' place *drools* Although I think that if I dare be in his place, Carlos would rather kill me XD Oh, oh! I found Ferru there! The one who's running with his arms wide open after a jogging Andy XDD I love their cute poses.
Ahahaha, you drew an angry Nemo!! Nole looks very interested in that poor yet famous creature XD I must say that I love Nole's flexible legs there XDD
All in all, thank you so much for very detailed(!!) HSPs and lovely words as always. Your kind attention never fails to amaze me and it encourages me so much to take a futher step in my writing. I owe you so much for all these nice feelings and I can only hope that somehow I'll manage to, at least, give something back to you in return :) Thank you so much *superhugs*
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