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flamyshine

Appetite (Chapter 14)

Oct 30, 2008 00:58

Title: Appetite
Main pairings: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic, David Ferrer/Andy Murray
Other characters: Carlos Moya, Tommy Haas
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Tommy and Carlos wake up in the morning after a dramatic night while Novak and David can't get over their losses.

( Chapter 14: Sweet kisses )

appetite, tennis slash

Comments 14

jeu_set_match October 29 2008, 17:28:52 UTC

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flamyshine October 30 2008, 09:57:38 UTC

OMG XDDD I couldn't stop laughing at poor Andy XD Hey, they fit so well in your picture *dies laughing*

Oh, Zoro raising-hair-nole Patrick, this is serious business XDD I can't stand Rafa's flower and Andy's... everything XD Ferru looks the best, no? Ah, the crack is too much!! :D *hugs*

jeu_set_match November 1 2008, 02:08:08 UTC

Lol I love squid!Andy so much I think I'll call Carlos (his name in France) Andy from now on. And SpongePics sounds good too.

Maranqui is more like :

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flamyshine November 1 2008, 12:26:41 UTC

Ahahaha, those beavers really do look like Marat/Juanqui (trying oh so hard not to use the outdated word) :D I love how Marat's all ehheehe-ing when Juanki's trying to push him XDDD

carolina30363 October 29 2008, 19:25:16 UTC

so lovely...I love how Carlos and Tommy realized their need to stay together and your David is the cutest thing ever....

flamyshine October 30 2008, 09:59:57 UTC

Aww, thank you :) I think your words are much lovelier :D Thank you for enjoying the story! *hugs*

slyreflection October 29 2008, 20:22:11 UTC

XD XD XD XD
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA FLAMY.
Spongebob Monopoly and Strawberries and...
*cracks up again*
SQUEEE I loved the Carlos/Tommy banter! Even when they were a little unsure of themselves they still had such great dialogue- Carlos' snoring and then Tommy with this:
“Carlos Moya! Do you think I waited six years to get a lousy kiss like that! Huh? You kiss me properly right now or I swear to God no matter how sick I get, I won’t see your god damn handsome face again!!”ROFLMAO! Hasi definitely appreciates Carlos' 'peak kissing skills' bwhahaha XD! Aww, they got back together and Tommy gets to ddo all his loving things with Carlos again! Made me crack up so hard that in the most tender 'awww!' moment all of a sudden there's an invasion of kinky!strawberries! *snickers ( ... )

flamyshine October 30 2008, 10:11:20 UTC

Boy, you're hyper today XD I think this is the most hyperist comment I've got from you, not that I'm complaining :D I just had to laugh with you throughout the whole comment *still giggling ( ... )

slyreflection October 30 2008, 20:50:26 UTC

Ahhh, everything makes sense now.
TS CRACK WEEK!!!
XD

pretty_panther October 29 2008, 21:29:57 UTC

ahaaaaaaaaa!!! loved it! Tommy and Carlos, Rafa and Novak, Ferru and Andy....and Marat...being Marat lol perfecto no?

flamyshine October 30 2008, 10:15:32 UTC

I wonder what I would've done without Marat XD He's so useful in so many different types of stories :D Thanks for the lovely comment!! I appreciate it very much *hugs*

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flamyshine October 30 2008, 10:19:23 UTC

Yes, Tommy and Carlos had had enough lonely days. Too bad Tommy had to get sick but I guess it was for a greater cause :)

I had to wonder what SM stood for XD You should try it one day, it's very interesting, even though I think the offline version would be much more fun :) I make Marat do horrible things in my stories XD Ah, poor thing *hugs him*

Thanks again for the wonderful comment. I'm so happy you're reading this :) *superhugs*