Appetite (Chapter 9)
Title: Appetite
Main pairing: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic
Other characters: Carlos Moya, Tommy Haas, David Ferrer, Andy Murray
Rating: R (just for a few dialogues)
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Carlos makes a costly mistake back at the hotel while Novak gets cranky and David gets up late in the ( Read more... )
(I will not talk about your icon XD No words for that. I should've changed the "leave a comment" to "lick one Nole" XD)
Since this story isn't an AU fic, yes, I do like to keep up with some of the aspects from the real tennis world :) Well, since Novak's issues didn't look like they were going to go away too fast, I thought I could use some space for poor Carlos. I absolutely adore writing about him, so I hope I can write him well, hehe.
The more I write, the more I feel that even Rafa needs to relieve his stress. Too much pressure and issues for both of them, I guess. Poor babies *hugs them but gets kicked for not writing a decent chapter* XD
I WILL write the "eating Nutella off the body" scene. Since I won't write anything even close to R or NC-17 after a month, I'm planning to satisfy the readers who might want more sexy scenes. So I haven't broken any promises regarding that list, yet :D
Mmmm, the Andy dream. Well, David can't really hide anything properly, so I guess you'll get to know all about his dreams in the next chapters XD Aww, I always seem to make Ferru suffer here and there *hugs him*
I so KNEW that my sentences were way too short! The story wasn't flowing, I noticed that too TT It's especially severe with the upper parts, I think. Ah, I'll definitely write better for the next chapter. Sorry for the mess. I've felt so unhappy about it *hugs* Yeah, and I blame my unhappiness to that FrenchiewhoIcan'ttalkabout *sobs*
Thanks for the comment, dear. You know how much it means to me :) *superhugs*
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