Title: Mr. Harvey J. Specter
Pairing: Harvey Specter/Mike Ross
Other character: Rachel Zane
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6,311
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters.
Warning: none
Summary: Harvey isn’t happy at all with Mike dating someone else under his nose.
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Chapter XXII: Falling into the sky )
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"Now that he was with Harvey, it didn’t seem too difficult to walk in the sand. He wasn’t in the desert anymore. He had made it out of the harsh land and Harvey was the one who had guided him to a safe place."
This is the coolest. I loved the desert/mirage references from earlier in the story, and using the sand/sea to make it come full circle is completely awesome. Also that was the part where my Dean Winchester-esque single tear came from my eye.
"Even after everything you did. I trust you to trust me when it really matters.”
SIGH. LOVE this line. So very perfect, so very Harvey!
Great job sticking with it and finishing writing this story even when you struggled and had to force updates out of yourself. It all turned out wonderfully :)
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I was worried that the chapter wasn't emotional enough but I didn't want it to be too mushy since they're still in the process of healing. (Yes, a big breakfast is part of healing too. It's the most important meal of the day!)
I had so much trouble with the dialogues in here that it's not even funny XD But yeah, just glad I got to finish it. There are no words to tell you how much I've appreciated your kind words so let me hug you!! *big bear hug*
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Love you!
Deb
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Thank you for all the kind words that really helped me get through! You're the best! *big BIG hug*
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Your kind words are too flattering :) I can hardly believe it! I don't think I deserve it, but thank you so much for the warm encouragement <3
I remember I just had a great time writing and writing, hoping for the best. I miss that feeling since I didn't get to write last year. So I'll try to get back on track again. Again, I really appreciate your generous words :D
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