Mr. Harvey J. Specter [22/22]

Sep 27, 2012 01:25


Title: Mr. Harvey J. Specter
Pairing: Harvey Specter/Mike Ross
Other character: Rachel Zane
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 6,311
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters.
Warning: none
Summary: Harvey isn’t happy at all with Mike dating someone else under his nose.

Chapter XXII: Falling into the sky )

mr. harvey j. specter, suits slash

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_nevergone September 28 2012, 10:20:04 UTC
Oh my gosh, it's finished!!! And my oh my what a beautiful finish it is. Well worth all the angst you threw in along the journey!

"Now that he was with Harvey, it didn’t seem too difficult to walk in the sand. He wasn’t in the desert anymore. He had made it out of the harsh land and Harvey was the one who had guided him to a safe place."

This is the coolest. I loved the desert/mirage references from earlier in the story, and using the sand/sea to make it come full circle is completely awesome. Also that was the part where my Dean Winchester-esque single tear came from my eye.

"Even after everything you did. I trust you to trust me when it really matters.”

SIGH. LOVE this line. So very perfect, so very Harvey!

Great job sticking with it and finishing writing this story even when you struggled and had to force updates out of yourself. It all turned out wonderfully :)

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flamyshine September 28 2012, 12:06:32 UTC
*sniffs* There's nothing like your supportive words T_T I guess we're even now since a Donna Paulsen/Demi Moore-esque single tear came from my eye while reading your review :)

I was worried that the chapter wasn't emotional enough but I didn't want it to be too mushy since they're still in the process of healing. (Yes, a big breakfast is part of healing too. It's the most important meal of the day!)

I had so much trouble with the dialogues in here that it's not even funny XD But yeah, just glad I got to finish it. There are no words to tell you how much I've appreciated your kind words so let me hug you!! *big bear hug*

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1stbonesfan September 28 2012, 17:31:38 UTC
Oh Flamy I just loved this chapter. It has such a poetic flair to it. I look forward to your next Marvey Chronicles chapter and your next story. And now that you've worked off a bit of that 'rust' I expect there to be another nice loooooooong story. :)
Love you!
Deb

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flamyshine September 29 2012, 07:50:35 UTC
*blushes* It means so much that you liked it :) Yes, I'll now work on the TMC epilogue where Marvey gets a new family. I do have many more stories I want to write so I hope I can do better next time :D

Thank you for all the kind words that really helped me get through! You're the best! *big BIG hug*

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benmel62 September 29 2012, 21:03:14 UTC
Bravo ! I love, love and love this story. The last chapter was worth to wait for it.

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flamyshine September 30 2012, 03:44:21 UTC
Thank you very much :D It brings me so much joy that you enjoyed it *big bear hug*

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naiasf February 9 2014, 06:45:05 UTC
Not the first time I am reading this but...it is such a great read every time. You manage to keep a perfect balance between the light and the heavy creating the perfect premises in order to convey a host of deep emotions of every kind and hue. I really really love your determined and focused Harvey. All is fair in love and war after all. But Mike is such a roller coaster...and every thought and feeling of his comes out with the utmost intensity and sincerity. Thank you for the great ride and I hope we will see new stories from you in this fandom. You are a true gem!

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flamyshine February 10 2014, 14:01:39 UTC
Ah, sorry for the late reply! I couldn't access LJ for some reason.

Your kind words are too flattering :) I can hardly believe it! I don't think I deserve it, but thank you so much for the warm encouragement <3

I remember I just had a great time writing and writing, hoping for the best. I miss that feeling since I didn't get to write last year. So I'll try to get back on track again. Again, I really appreciate your generous words :D

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