story notes for later because I'm... well, you know
5:31:54 PM Tony: anyway, been working on this story some more
5:32:07 PM Tony: I decided to extend the events in the prologue, but not have them "in" the prologue
5:32:10 PM Tony: to be talked about later
5:32:35 PM Tony: the explosions and shit occurring in the valley of angels and demons, which is what the site will be called in the story
5:33:04 PM Tony: is going to be a giant fucking crater in the earth that's explicitly forbidden and illegal to even go within 200 miles of
5:33:11 PM Tony: but that doesn't happen for some years
5:33:30 PM Tony: part of the flaming trees and forests are going to crash into a school that Leo went to up in the mountains
5:33:41 PM Tony: killing off most of the dragon clad that went there
5:33:50 PM Tony: and part of that uniform will be a black tie
5:34:02 PM Tony: all of this, because I want another third sphere dragon present
5:34:09 PM Tony: a female
5:34:21 PM Tony: along the introductory means that Wolf's Rain had for Bleu
5:34:40 PM Tony: you know, a female who's ten times more feral than a male
5:34:59 PM Tony: and I will do all of this for one sole reason
5:35:17 PM Tony: that whole dragon detonation thing that begins the story arcing into living on mars for 5 years as the sun continues to expand
5:35:32 PM Tony: now there will be two Valhallan dragons
5:35:41 PM confiable robo: fffffff
5:35:42 PM Tony: and yeah, I'm gonna use a norse theme for it
5:35:53 PM Tony: with the christian godhead's means of hierarchy
5:36:01 PM Tony: higher circles of heaven
5:36:16 PM Tony: Leo will belong to the third sphere, that way, when the story evolves past mars, through the asteroid belt
5:36:32 PM Tony: and the third arc exists solely as the space colony wreckage drifting toward Jupiter
5:36:45 PM Tony: the third sphere becomes perceivable by humans, and Leo returns
5:37:07 PM Tony: in the form of a dragon that aimlessly wanders from the asteroid belt, back to the drifting colony
5:37:26 PM Tony: as its structure is so flimsy and weak, it must drift for years until its hull is repaired and stable again
5:37:30 PM Tony: to be towed by Leo
5:37:45 PM Tony: then the fourth sphere of heaven becomes perceivable to humans
5:38:03 PM Tony: and all of Jupiter's gaseous mists begin to expand and burst outward
5:38:30 PM Tony: as the entirety of the planet reveals itself to be a gaseous vapour rising from a mucus membrane
5:38:39 PM Tony: and that will be the SPACE JORMUNGAND
5:38:51 PM Tony: and then there will be an amazing SPACE DRAGON BATTLE
5:39:04 PM confiable robo: hell YES
5:39:08 PM Tony: but i'll incorporate some bullshit reason to have the colony merge onto Leo's body
5:39:12 PM Tony: and he becomes MECHA DRAGON GOD
5:39:27 PM Tony: with floating colony wings with solar panels on them
5:39:45 PM Tony: that this dragon is a living biological entity, and the rest of humanity's existence LIVES ON HIS BODY
5:39:52 PM Tony: as he FIGHTS SPACE DRAGONS
5:40:17 PM Tony: i'll throw in some political bullshit, as the protagonist female will at this point int he story, inherit presidential control of the colony
5:40:28 PM Tony: and the civil war that occurrs during this will have the colonies split
5:40:51 PM Tony: leaving the smaller refugee traces to live on saturn's moon of Titan
5:41:11 PM Tony: as a religious sect gains power and they choose to remain there as the sun expands
5:41:22 PM Tony: believing its ice will shelter them from an ensuing solar flare
5:41:40 PM Tony: at this point in the story, this will be the end of Act II
5:41:48 PM Tony: the story will have 4 acts mind you
5:42:17 PM Tony: as at htis point, the religious sect proclaims dominance and superiority over the colonies from the resources they've obtained, 90% of what remains, onto titan
5:42:23 PM Tony: and then the sun dies out
5:42:29 PM Tony: no solar flare
5:42:52 PM Tony: and within 30 seconds without the body heat of Leo, the planet freezes into nothingness, falls out of saturn's orbit
5:43:15 PM Tony: and then, the blackened, lightless moon begins to growl
5:43:19 PM Tony: and act II ends
5:43:26 PM Tony: what you think so far?
5:32:07 PM Tony: I decided to extend the events in the prologue, but not have them "in" the prologue
5:32:10 PM Tony: to be talked about later
5:32:35 PM Tony: the explosions and shit occurring in the valley of angels and demons, which is what the site will be called in the story
5:33:04 PM Tony: is going to be a giant fucking crater in the earth that's explicitly forbidden and illegal to even go within 200 miles of
5:33:11 PM Tony: but that doesn't happen for some years
5:33:30 PM Tony: part of the flaming trees and forests are going to crash into a school that Leo went to up in the mountains
5:33:41 PM Tony: killing off most of the dragon clad that went there
5:33:50 PM Tony: and part of that uniform will be a black tie
5:34:02 PM Tony: all of this, because I want another third sphere dragon present
5:34:09 PM Tony: a female
5:34:21 PM Tony: along the introductory means that Wolf's Rain had for Bleu
5:34:40 PM Tony: you know, a female who's ten times more feral than a male
5:34:59 PM Tony: and I will do all of this for one sole reason
5:35:17 PM Tony: that whole dragon detonation thing that begins the story arcing into living on mars for 5 years as the sun continues to expand
5:35:32 PM Tony: now there will be two Valhallan dragons
5:35:41 PM confiable robo: fffffff
5:35:42 PM Tony: and yeah, I'm gonna use a norse theme for it
5:35:53 PM Tony: with the christian godhead's means of hierarchy
5:36:01 PM Tony: higher circles of heaven
5:36:16 PM Tony: Leo will belong to the third sphere, that way, when the story evolves past mars, through the asteroid belt
5:36:32 PM Tony: and the third arc exists solely as the space colony wreckage drifting toward Jupiter
5:36:45 PM Tony: the third sphere becomes perceivable by humans, and Leo returns
5:37:07 PM Tony: in the form of a dragon that aimlessly wanders from the asteroid belt, back to the drifting colony
5:37:26 PM Tony: as its structure is so flimsy and weak, it must drift for years until its hull is repaired and stable again
5:37:30 PM Tony: to be towed by Leo
5:37:45 PM Tony: then the fourth sphere of heaven becomes perceivable to humans
5:38:03 PM Tony: and all of Jupiter's gaseous mists begin to expand and burst outward
5:38:30 PM Tony: as the entirety of the planet reveals itself to be a gaseous vapour rising from a mucus membrane
5:38:39 PM Tony: and that will be the SPACE JORMUNGAND
5:38:51 PM Tony: and then there will be an amazing SPACE DRAGON BATTLE
5:39:04 PM confiable robo: hell YES
5:39:08 PM Tony: but i'll incorporate some bullshit reason to have the colony merge onto Leo's body
5:39:12 PM Tony: and he becomes MECHA DRAGON GOD
5:39:27 PM Tony: with floating colony wings with solar panels on them
5:39:45 PM Tony: that this dragon is a living biological entity, and the rest of humanity's existence LIVES ON HIS BODY
5:39:52 PM Tony: as he FIGHTS SPACE DRAGONS
5:40:17 PM Tony: i'll throw in some political bullshit, as the protagonist female will at this point int he story, inherit presidential control of the colony
5:40:28 PM Tony: and the civil war that occurrs during this will have the colonies split
5:40:51 PM Tony: leaving the smaller refugee traces to live on saturn's moon of Titan
5:41:11 PM Tony: as a religious sect gains power and they choose to remain there as the sun expands
5:41:22 PM Tony: believing its ice will shelter them from an ensuing solar flare
5:41:40 PM Tony: at this point in the story, this will be the end of Act II
5:41:48 PM Tony: the story will have 4 acts mind you
5:42:17 PM Tony: as at htis point, the religious sect proclaims dominance and superiority over the colonies from the resources they've obtained, 90% of what remains, onto titan
5:42:23 PM Tony: and then the sun dies out
5:42:29 PM Tony: no solar flare
5:42:52 PM Tony: and within 30 seconds without the body heat of Leo, the planet freezes into nothingness, falls out of saturn's orbit
5:43:15 PM Tony: and then, the blackened, lightless moon begins to growl
5:43:19 PM Tony: and act II ends
5:43:26 PM Tony: what you think so far?