so many words you wrote for this fic where should i begin? first of all, /dances around because you took the time to read this fudging long fic. second of all yes the rabbit scene was rather unexpected yeah >_< but i found it amusing as well after i typed it up. i always liked writing friendships a certain way (a little on the abusing teasing side and i really like that) and i'm glad you like it too. gwahhh
okay so as for the feels part. i guess i didn't make it clear enough but it's like... both yifan and chanyeol acknowledged that there was maybe? lust between them but that didn't mean the building of a romantic relationship b/c relationships aren't usually based off of that. yifan was quite stupidly in love, and i tried to make their characterizations a little dif from usual krisyeol fics. like yifan here is ... kind of loving chanyeol from the sidelines most of the time, watching him and looking out for him. while chanyeol kind of doesn't see the romantic 'love' part of his feelings? i didn't put it into the fic (cuz it's not from his pov) but it's like, when baekhyun confessed to chanyeol, he looked back at him and can only see kris in his mind and then he realizes (that pabo).
so yeah. okay TYSM for the critique on the smut part because omfg that was my first /real-ish/ smut writing and ;____; i felt awkward writing it as well? does practice make better? anyway it'd prbly be some time b4 i try to do that again rofl. word usage was the most difficult thing for me glad you noticed (it's just. most of the words used aren't used in NORMAL EVERYDAY LANGUAGE SO YEAH. O_O) hahaha /gives you lots of hearts
it was a monster to read, i'll admit, but it was worth it! secondly, i thought it was such a good launchpad/precursor for the rest of their relationship, since from the beginning, it was always kris taking care of chanyeol from the sidelines, watching while his feelings slowly caught flame and stirred into a huge burning love for chanyeol LOL.
oh your explanation really cleared things up tbh! it all really makes sense now. wow, chanyeol was really dense omfg.
i'll answer the smut portion of your comment in our inbox message; i was going to answer it here, but it got super longwinded omfg. and yES i definitely get the word usage comment. really gotta tap into a different part of your brain while writing lmfao. it's probably why i get myself into a kind of trance when i'm /really/ absorbed with my writing. my mind just works differently because oBVIOUSLY i'm not entirely well-spoken lmfao.
(i adore long comments.i know you do too.)
so many words you wrote for this fic where should i begin? first of all, /dances around because you took the time to read this fudging long fic. second of all
yes the rabbit scene was rather unexpected yeah
>_< but i found it amusing as well after i typed it up. i always liked writing friendships a certain way (a little on the abusing teasing side and i really like that) and i'm glad you like it too.
gwahhh
okay so as for the feels part. i guess i didn't make it clear enough but it's like... both yifan and chanyeol acknowledged that there was maybe? lust between them but that didn't mean the building of a romantic relationship b/c relationships aren't usually based off of that. yifan was quite stupidly in love, and i tried to make their characterizations a little dif from usual krisyeol fics. like yifan here is ... kind of loving chanyeol from the sidelines most of the time, watching him and looking out for him. while chanyeol kind of doesn't see the romantic 'love' part of his feelings? i didn't put it into the fic (cuz it's not from his pov) but it's like, when baekhyun confessed to chanyeol, he looked back at him and can only see kris in his mind and then he realizes (that pabo).
so yeah.
okay TYSM for the critique on the smut part because omfg that was my first /real-ish/ smut writing and ;____; i felt awkward writing it as well? does practice make better? anyway it'd prbly be some time b4 i try to do that again rofl. word usage was the most difficult thing for me glad you noticed (it's just. most of the words used aren't used in NORMAL EVERYDAY LANGUAGE SO YEAH. O_O) hahaha
/gives you lots of hearts
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(and yes i do!!! LOL)
it was a monster to read, i'll admit, but it was worth it! secondly, i thought it was such a good launchpad/precursor for the rest of their relationship, since from the beginning, it was always kris taking care of chanyeol from the sidelines, watching while his feelings slowly caught flame and stirred into a huge burning love for chanyeol LOL.
oh your explanation really cleared things up tbh! it all really makes sense now. wow, chanyeol was really dense omfg.
i'll answer the smut portion of your comment in our inbox message; i was going to answer it here, but it got super longwinded omfg. and yES i definitely get the word usage comment. really gotta tap into a different part of your brain while writing lmfao. it's probably why i get myself into a kind of trance when i'm /really/ absorbed with my writing. my mind just works differently because oBVIOUSLY i'm not entirely well-spoken lmfao.
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