Fic: Yellow

May 27, 2010 20:49

Title: Yellow
Author: flagrantialuna
Rating: R
Words: 1763
Trope: ??? unrequited (but not really)
Genre: h/c (I think?)
Series: Reboot-alicious.
Summary: Look at the stars/ Look how they shine for you...
A/N: This was supposed to be fluff... and then I started typing...and Coldplay isn't mine.

Yay for Coldplay! )

stxi, kirk/spock

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flagrantialuna May 28 2010, 01:22:37 UTC
It is kinda like Enchanted, innit? Oh, Princess Spock, Sir Kirk will tell you all about true love someday!

... Suddenly in my head, Spock is now in that huge blue dress and Kirk's on a white horse wearing chain mail. Oh brain, why do you do this to me?

Thanks for the quote-backs. :) It's always nice to hear what lines people liked the most.

I seriously debated having a conversation between them, and I actually wrote part of one. But it was super-girly. And it made me feel lame. So I cut it out.

I'm glad you thought it was true to TOS. It definitely could have been either or for me, but I wasn't confident enough in my knowledge of TOS to actually label it as such.

(... P.S. What's with the Italian thingy?)

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Re: STAR TREK: THE VOYAGE HOME (THE ONE WITH THE WHALES!) flagrantialuna May 28 2010, 01:41:10 UTC
... Well, then! I know what I'm watching when school gets out...

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flagrantialuna May 28 2010, 01:25:49 UTC
When it comes to emotions, Jim's self-esteem is worth chicken-shit... at least in my mind...

I think they might have worked it out eventually, but it definitely may have taken longer (i.e. end of the mission or something ridiculous) without Uhura nudging them in the right direction.

She is such a BAMF.

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easilymused1956 May 28 2010, 03:42:36 UTC
You really got things right. Men only talk about a relationship after a woman makes them.

Lovely story.

Renee

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flagrantialuna May 28 2010, 17:14:15 UTC
The guys I know are all about silent communication, y'know? It's actually kinda stupid in my opinion, but I guess I can't knock it since I made a story out of it. :)

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renuki May 28 2010, 04:24:18 UTC
*grins at Uhura* Good going girl!

*smiles at the end*

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flagrantialuna May 28 2010, 17:15:00 UTC
Uhura is so awesome. She makes my life 100000% more awesome. On a daily basis.

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awarrington May 28 2010, 06:56:19 UTC
That was really beautiful and poetic and heart-rending. I loved it! :-)

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flagrantialuna May 28 2010, 17:16:12 UTC
Aw... Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it! It's definitely been sitting on my computer for about a month because of my own insecurities... Yay for lack of self-esteem!

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