Title: Uneasy Allies in Untruth
Author:
AmilynRecipient:
Twilight2000Beta-Readers:
wiliqueen and
brightknightiePrompt: Home run for the good guys, plot focused preferred (hey, what can I say? I love that kind of story!)
Characters: Nick, Natalie, Janette, Schanke, LaCroix
Length: 9400 words
Rating: PG
Summary: A year and a half ago, an unidentified vigilante went on a spree
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Great case, great character stuff. But my favorite bit is still Nat and Janette rolling their eyes at the perpetual tug-of-war.
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I was going to say exactly that. :)
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Plus, as I agreed with Val, my favorite bit was Janette and Natalie having a collective moment of exasperation with the boys.
I love this story.
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I'm so thrilled you loved it! I didn't realize that I'd manage hit the perfect storm of all the attributes of your favorite stories and of FK in this story, but I'm THRILLED!
I love Natalie and Janette bonding over the boys being idiotic squabblers, too.
Thank you!!!
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I love your Natalie--teasing Nick about his reaction to Janette, facing down Lacroix and winning, realizing what her desire to keep Richard around did, and facing up to that. Really, really nicely done.
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