Pimpage: Reversing The Veil
A Potter Place Variety Challenge 2009 “Reversing the Veil” (WIP) has been updated and can be found here:
http://www.thepetulantpoetess.com/viewstory.php?sid=12961&i=1
Here is a snippet from Chapter Four:
“Thank you,” Hermione replied with a smile. “Okay, let's see. I know you two are going to want to go to ‘An Itch for Quidditch.' How about I go to ‘There's No Place like Tomes’ and meet you at ‘How Sweet It Is’ in half an hour?”
“Alright,” Harry said.
Ron grinned at Hermione. “Leave it to you to choose the two stores that we will spend the most time in.”
“I didn't spend all that time with you two in Diagon Alley for nothing. Okay, half an hour,” Hermione said, setting her watch. “See you then!”
Knowing that her time was limited, Hermione hurried down Enchanter's Way and was soon entering the shop. A smile crept over her face as she saw that the layout of the shop was similar to a library.
“Welcome to my shop,” the witch behind the counter said to her. “Please take your time and look around, and be sure to ask me if you need any help.”
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