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[Fic] Summer Camp: Holding Out Part 3

Jul 04, 2011 01:25

I had a bit of writer's block today, so this is a bit... not as good. And shorter. Sorry about that.

Title: Holding Out - Part 3: Science
Characters: England, America
Rating/Warnings: PG-13. Sorta X-men-universe crossoverish kinda sorta except I call 'mutants' 'supers' so maybe The Incredibles crossoverish kinda sorta? Point is, some people have ( Read more... )

america, au super-verse, fanfic, england, hetalia

Comments 8

redblonde7 July 4 2011, 06:04:27 UTC

I've just read all the ones in this 'super-verse' and I've really enjoyed it. How you made Alfred a super was a little expected but Arthur being a billionaire and rescuing him by pretending that Alfred's his brother was definitely not expected and I really liked that twist.

And Alfred trying to find Matthew while Arthur is trying to figure out how to be a guardian to a young boy were both very sweet.

fivedayslater July 17 2011, 01:12:40 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

renuki July 4 2011, 06:34:59 UTC

*smiles* That was lovely! :D

fivedayslater July 17 2011, 01:12:48 UTC

Thank you! :D

sephydark July 4 2011, 08:22:27 UTC

What an incredibly cute chapter. I love that England is the one defending science (and helping America to understand what it is about) for once--and can't help but feel that England's right that many of the scientists are just trying to figure out something they don't understand.

fivedayslater July 17 2011, 01:29:47 UTC

Thank you! It's nice to mix it up every now and then.

monochrome_flat July 4 2011, 11:30:43 UTC

A very creative way to incorporate the new theme. Arthur is such a mommie to Alfred! So cute!

(And the poor telly. XD)

fivedayslater July 17 2011, 01:36:23 UTC

Thank you! He can't help himself sometimes. XD