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[fistfullofglass]

i'm going to just put things i write in here, and here's the first of a few, it's a verse i wrote last night

you look at the ghetto, nothing get's better it's just gettin' worse
while you out having fun some young man get's carried out in a hearse
i say the shit these people ain't got the heart to say
i live life, love life, make the best of this dying day
because ain't nothing gonna get better in this world
when all you motherfuckers be polluting this world
with your nonsense, think hip hop is about cars and hoes?
wrong, hip hop is reality, it's about the life we know
but no one want's to hear political commentary from some white boy
so shit i might as well just remain unheard, because this white boy
ain't never gonna get noticed, i ain't trying to get famous
just wanna get the word out, fuck the corporate anus

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