Bite the Bullet - Ruki/Aoi

Sep 08, 2009 10:47

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Smut, Humor
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: None
Summary: Going around his own kitchen half hard and being unable to have a single meal without thinking inappropriate thoughts about his own table wasn’t exactly the way Aoi liked to spend his free days. And to think it was all Ruki’s fault.
Word count: 1,745
Disclaimer: I'm in no way ( Read more... )

gazefic, yaoi, rukixaoi

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gratiela September 9 2009, 19:18:53 UTC
OMG, I've been out of town for 5 days and you're writing!!!!!

*goes to read!@_@*

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fishisbad September 9 2009, 19:23:14 UTC
And your absence was noticed! Don't fall asleep halfway. (I still can't read through it without getting bored.)

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gratiela September 16 2009, 08:39:12 UTC
*gets shot in the leg* I actually DID fall asleep while I was reading, damn.... Physical exhaustion, probably.

But to be perfectly honest, I didn't really loved this smut as much as your other writings. I dunno, it may also be that I'm quite in a messy state, I dunno.
Actually it was very realistic and had a good flow - maybe I just want to drug myself on some fluff..
I'm PMSing

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fishisbad September 16 2009, 08:57:10 UTC
Oh, boy :DDDDDDDDD I once fell asleep looking over this while I was still in the process of trying to write it.

I can't tell you how much it makes me happy to hear you be perfectly honest. Because getting comments to this story, it felt like people didn't like it really. And I just kept wishing someone will tell me. But of course it is not easy being honest, I am not exactly sure how much of it I could take without feeling hurt. But it pleases me you were honest, maybe because it is you. I don't know.

I personally don't like this piece much either. I wrote it because heygeorge wanted table porn, but I never felt it properly. Writing it. It gave me so much trouble and I was happy when I first sent it to her and she said she liked it. But for some reason I grew to almost hate it. I can't explain why. I can't pinpoint what is wrong with the story, I am just not feeling it. But what is done is done.

Sorry for all the soul baring. PMSing too.

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gratiela September 16 2009, 09:10:28 UTC
Well.. yeah, of course it was slightly uncomfortable saying I didn't like this too much - but hey... not everything is perfect, I believe it's important to point out the less pleasant parts, maybe next time it will be better!
You understand probably - I wasn't talking just about writing, but about all IMPORTANT things in life. No need to apologize for soulbaring! (though.. I apologise all the time... o_O)
maybe there is a useful way to use the sensitive PMS state lol - if we're honest enough
*hugs you*
Oh, and some cookies for you, too!

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fishisbad September 16 2009, 09:19:59 UTC
Yes, maybe next time it will be better. Maybe being the keyword :))) I had some chamomile tea, it helped calm me and lift my mood. I am actually getting too hyper and cheery now. Which kind of scares me because downer could be next.

*hugs you back* And thank you for the cookies! They are actually first cookies I got and could actually see :))) They look kind of sexy. I am lame so I have no cookies to give in return. But I can share :)

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gratiela September 16 2009, 10:05:31 UTC
Thanks for sharing!! *munches on you. wait, lol.. on the COOKIES! XD*

Wild mood swings kinda scare me too! o_O

Hmm... and I feel like pimping to you a song I really-really-REALLY REALLY LOVE! It's a new one by the Editors - Papillion.
I heard it live last month.. the whole concert was... amazing to me!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h8AMCmRL6Zc

(I messed the codes to the link, lol.. but you'll figure it out I'm sure! xDDDD)

(also this comes with the blond-Uru-Million-Watt-smile... so you can forget all unimportant things that bug you!)

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fishisbad September 16 2009, 10:10:51 UTC
Yes, I figured it out :) I remember you saying that you went to their concert. They look cool.

Ahh, at times like these I really wish I had Gazette icons too, but here have a Ferrero Rocher instead :)

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gratiela September 16 2009, 10:39:29 UTC
Mmmmmmmm... fine chocolates! Just as good as bright smiles!

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